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08-17-03, 10:29 PM
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New to RB
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No Purchase Neccessary
IP: 8D3A FBB7
Tell me what is free and I'll be quick in response
If money grew on trees I'll be rich and nonchalant. So give me some examples with money matching love That is easy knowing you are scratching the rough. It seems what I want is what I seek, but I don't need Not needing what I want...So is that hidden greed? Seeing what I believe so the truth is in my eyes I pride on the seeds that are following from behind. It blows my mind how time encompasses every movement And shows the shine of the human race, it is improving. No illusions in legerdemain as magicians try to explain The main focus of their acts remain sane; unlike David Blane. Departured plane into the flames and depth of solitude A rude awakening pacing the price of lat. and longitude. The prelude is bumps and bruises the ending is despair Don't tell me it isn't there as it loses pending shares. In the lair beneath the layers of stock brokers smoke.. So thick that it's unbearable..until I knocked myself broke. Hard to cope with the loss, but hey I found a new way Looked back at all the hatred against me, so I too pray.. Everyday, its abnormal..remember the slashing on our backs? Thats in the past, now it's not normal...since we honor blacks. Slipped through the cracks of deceit and reality...that's life Ripped from my family, past the concrete...beside my wife. Weeds began growing, then a beautiful rose sprouted It's the course of nature in the ghetto, we were doubted.. But we made the best of things and had all types of endeavors Made it through fucked up weather, succeeded in any measure. And of course, we paid our dues to get respected..just barley Like in the old days I worked for free...no purchase neccessary.
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08-18-03, 01:03 AM
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Suspended Suspense
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IP: E0A0 6C4A
god damn kid, both of your rhymes that i have checked out, were impecable, perfect flow, vocab, word-play, are you a vet in newbs clothing? i sincerely look forward to seeing more of your work
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