Clearly spoken of truths, lies is packin heat
Where streets soldiers and crackheads, meet upon the streets
Speek in codes, police is gonna be lookin
Look upon the street, its a shootout grill, and beef is cookin
Seemingly comin through, my keystyle rips enough
Its unbearable, like watchin mercy killings of kids 2& up
Keep rhymin priests is touchin children even as we speak
Im a Roman Catholic, but Church is corrupted from all that I see
We just ended war, and yet we still in our problems
CIA couldn't stop 9/11, so whose going to solve them
We had cear knowledge, our verses the future
But speakin truth in front of youth is not what your used to
Its clearly rivalries sparkin death upon the rap world
Raping is like a sport, with R.kelly touching young girls
I see it in your eyes, you have been plagued, by all surprised
Its credential to understand, the gold of rap, before others realize
Our spoken truths rip through and through the verses we spark
Its crystal clear to me now, like the clarity in eyes of a hawk
We can't stop what will happen, but wait and prepare
We needn't a year on this planet, to know that life is unfair
I see evil everywhere i turnit just can't be stopped
Maybe its too much to understand the matter is fragile
but words upon my mind speakin in phrases so agile
Life is a bitch, you die ,but do you come back
Those banned for biting, your gone, realized that your whack
Thats a comparison for Rb and life^^^

lookin for good feedback on this and my other piece, so if you have the time peep "Life is Over"

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this was pretty good..the1st few lines it was so so..didnt know how it would turn out..then it really picked up..content was good..a lot of nice lines..too many too quote..flow was cool..multis were ok..could use more..but thats just me..nice drop..worth the read..dunno y ppl sleep n..

this had some good flow, but the topic shifted too much. You're main problem here was focus, you seemed to flop from idea to idea without much linking, something that can disrupt the reading.