5-10 lines
im first
no dr hate crew votes
no feedin or bitin
dont take too long

good luck

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i ment 10 bars....sorry....o well here it is\/\/\/\/

i'll lyrically rip syllables into ya chest like bullets/your rap is so old and used up i wouldnt be surprised if you had a mullet/(1)

i can rip your nose through ya brain/ii'll snap ya neck and leave ya really 'hangin' i cant wait to kill you...its drivin me insane/and the only way to dump ya dirty ass body would not be car or carry...but crane/(2)

brake ya legs and use em as toothpics/you'll be missen ya brain and you'll think your mom and sis are hotchicks/but since you a hick you'd marry ya sister in a sec and you'd want to have children but neither one has a dick/(3)

i'll pop you like i pop a champaigne bottle/you still coudlnt spit good if you "came" full throttle/my first line will have make you scared and run..o wiat waddle/(4)

i'll knock out all ya teeth so you can get a visit tonight/from the tooth fairy A.K.A. ya mom...you knew that right?/do you still beleive and santa and the bunny?well know you know they're fake and you have no will to fight/(5)

i dont know why they made your kind legal to marry/(gays)i think its kinda scary..when ya answerin machine says "chrit and harry..."/and how can you like it up the bum,if you need a small dick you fit in that category/(6)

when i spit the mic is on fire/when you spit i could use a sheild of chicken wire/cause i aint bein hit like an archer in the shire/(7)

give ya fingers a brake and save me the trouble/i could be takin out some one worth while, and even mc rewind is your skill...double/(8)(mc rewind 0-11)

chrit you dont spit, your to busy suckin dick/and im a lyrical assassin and your about to get hit/and even if you run...well you cant run from my shit/(9)

im feared at, your sneered on/your laughed at,im heared on/so dont fuck withme i will kill you so ravenous/they wont be able to clean-up-the-mess/(10)

Aight look

5-10 lines I'm first!!... this kid just foreshadowed a prewrite/
Chrit vs a newbie with no skill this shit's like a cripple fight/
Peep the return of a real vet as opposed to these fake thugs/
Throwin up ficticious sets, and repping net drugs/
In this battle I'll be Hitler and this posing punk will be the Jews/
Call this the Holocaust 2 the way this bitch has no choice but to lose/
It's emcees like this that made Chrit leave the frontlines/
So fake that this kid broke out a calculator when he was asked to pull nines/
So why try it, you have no way to beat me/
A win's ficticious just like saying Kobe is guilt-free/
So just give up and here's a gift... an autograph you can have it.../
Just keep that shit on you so you can finally posess some talent/

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Dropped 12 lines... didnt feel like 10 bars....

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Wallbanger-Ur Verse was a lil off...not feelin the structure or flow
U have to use a magnifing glass just to find ur punches...Ur "Bars" or lines are streched out way too far

Chrit- U have nice flow and punches...u threw out a real verse

my vote=chrit

-no beef or hate-

honestly votes here:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=74311

My vote go's to chrit
better flow wordplay and punches


Banga came a lil choppy and didnt have a good vibe to it at all

No beef vote chrit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74447

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chrit-punches, flow and wordplay...cant poll vote, sorry
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74453

Chrit takes this with some ill lines...his flow was on point more, had better vocab adn didn't drop wack lines...wallbanger some punches were good but some were real weak...no hate...Peace

vote-chrit

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yo my nigga chrit got this, his first was ill as fuck, banger chrit's a lil rusty but still knows what the fuck he is doin, he took it with a better overall verse, in my eyes he did

poll vote- chrit

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If i could poll vote it would be for Chrit I liked his structure. Props!
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