10 LINES (5 BARZ)

NO CREW
NO HATE (REGIME)
NO DICKRIDIN
NO FEEDIN

u drop 1st

oh this iz gonna be fun....init?

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check it then 1,2 1,2

yo!
I heard you take more back hands than a guy thats double jointed,
Even if you were spitting god words the church wouldnt leave you anointed.

When you feel these hits you'd better belive it you gonna be stuck stoned and spun,
and even if you were spitting ya reaslist shit you couldnt move me im heavy weight like big pun.

Ya just a copy cat talkin G's and gats but really you just a little pussy,
You think your real like shaquel slammin rims is the deal but the only rims you feel are around the tushy.

You kissin ass all the time for people ta up ya rhymes thats why ya aced in biology,
but it wasnt ya fortey cuz the only time you get foreplay is when you fakin ginocology.

I'll leave you fucking envyous like ya name you must be spenin less cuz ya so cheap,
and ya rhymes garbage sucker you just like any mutha fucker i'll pick you up and chuck ya in a heap.

OFF FORM OLD CHAP........10 lines 5 bars though iight...!!!!

Jus seen droppin when im don

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BROOKLYN STAND UP

This kid says hes in Contagious hes a fake net gangsta thats why he cant be 4 real
He's never gonna have a big deal like midgets signing a bonus take 50 cent gun from ur sig and u know what to feel
RB should prohibit this kid fm droppin on the site cuz like Jesus I forseen this TKO
Shatter 4REAL'S spine so he can lay~back let ur body corode all ur leader's wins came from bein dickrode
Only thing tats CONTAGIOUS is ur crews wackness mine as well swallow ya spit cuz this fag is full~of~himself
Internet thug couldnt in reality become a menace if if his full name was Dennis XL4REAL couldnt become smart even if he slept in tha shelf (books in shelf)

I did'nt feel I had to really go anymore so 6 lines
n if u dont understan use ur brain 4 real lol

~won~

vote- XL.......i felt he came harder......better flow and punches...his verse just hit harder.....nuff said....1

drop a poll vote.....1

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WHAT A DICKRIDER lol get out my forum

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^^disagree....XL..u had a nice verse man....but u had no multis....and u punches were kinda soft....(ex. church lines & Big Pun lines).....ur vocabulary is ok.....ur flow was nice.....but like i said ur punches just were kinda threw off.....Envy...u had some nice punches...only played line i really noticed was a midget line....but if u use a played line....and change it differently than it is normally seen...then it's coo....so it was nice.....u had nice punches....better wordplay...ur flow was kinda....BLAH....but overall...i think it was decent enough to win this....

peace
4:20

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close battle breakdown

punches ny
metas didnt c much both
flow xl
consistancy ny
multis didnt see alot both
personals both
consistancy ny
overall ny

no hate tho jus my opinion good and close battle tho

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I dunno ENVY
wasnt feelin your shit that much here

YOU AND I KNOW YOU COULD HAVE DONE BETTER

My vote goes to Xl for better dissing flow and structure

NO BEEF

punches-xl
personals-ny he was on that sig
multiples-ny
complexity-ny
humor-neitha
overall-ny

good battle

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envy ny- Much better punches and flow....easier read
vote= envy

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