aiight 10 linez
3-0 KO
First to five

my win is way overdue, this is the ~JUMP OFF~ and this kid ~bouncin~ like a ~kangaroo~Im ~fly~ like a ~Cardinal~ running with the win like im ~Emmitt~ but this isn't a ~catch 22~/
I Pre-pair this lyrical ~BOMB~ as you step on my ~turf~ done as I ~LAND-MINES~in this divine~ Race you start to ~fall behind~ wouldn't ~ketch-up~ if you was ~heinz~/
Lonley envy aint have nobody to turn to besides his R-B and MICROSOFT-CLUB I'm going to Wax dis bitch with a ~CLEAN~ verse because he just a ~SOFT-SCRUB~/
I'll ~Slit~ threw your organs with 1 ~incision~ Just to show you ~LONG~ DIVISION~you can have the Buccs on your tv, you still wouldn't have a ~Winning Vision~/
battle of the best Poet, but your rhymes are ~worn out~ like a ~LA RAIDERS~ COAT~envy was ~dieing~ to ~MEAT~ and ~Choking~ so it's only me who plays ~CUT THROAT~/
Im not playin anymore, will your verse ever started to sound dense, no offense~you stoped making sense, your rhymes are past-tense like old 2pac rap-events/
sign in for registration, prepair to unrival RB`s best rapper, like the heavns gate~^ make you eat Metal fuck your favorite meal, I set up your Execution ~License PLATE~/
this guy must think he's 50 Cent like hes a PIMP going for Ashely and tried to Marry-kate~his love was to ~LIMP~ and very bad timing they said,you couldn't.. E-JACK-YOU-LATE/
your throat will be sore from sucking off your crew, like slavery ya start humming~Like a ~DryLoad~ your being ~Beat~ and your ~Soldiers~ are not ~CUM~ing/
all I hear is thunder-there, you guys are Hiding, I yell "like ~Haynes~ ~Under-WEAR~"(where)~POOR~ envy walks around ~collecting change~ with a ~coffee cup~ and attacks to prove he a ~MUGGER~/
you got to your ~home~ to ~run~& im from ~LOUISVILLE~ so your getting ~BAT~tered this inning ~SLUGGER~/

newbie who?

are my rhymes in fucking neon green to everyone else or something, every time i spit the person just doesnt reply...WTF? cmon yall how am I gonna make yall better if yall just pussy out after reading my rhymes....

just seen can tell me i'd actually pussy out

~added rule~
no hate votes (regime)

ok ill drop soon I dont pre write

Damn you is a pussy...Im settin this up so it can be chalked up as a win under my new name...Damn you fuckin prewriter, takin forever.

BROOKLYN STAND UP

*kid still had more then 10 lines n 5 bars LMAO*

Like the world trade center he needs to rebuild his structure
Ruskus cocks more nines than Micheal Jackson im not a boxer but ur brain gets puctured
He confused my dick for being milk Ruskus couldnt cum wit a smile
Trying to spread his own disease so he can start feeling ill like fags in jail he cant become vile
Cut ur hands off cuz u cant simply handle the situation
Fag is from the D-dickridin city he likes the internet becuz of E~MALES herb gets beat on any occasion
Drop earthquakes in ur mouth so I can shake and split ur jaw
He loves pens took 15 minutes for his verse he cant spit heat cuz his verse was raw
Couldnt claim he was clutchin guns cuz he was holdin his pen like pilots n training he cant land a punch
You better off getting neutered cuz ur verse is just getting slept on he bites so much feed him a crunch(crunch-candy bar)

breakdown

punches ny
flow both
multies ny
personals both but lil raw
consistancy raw
worth readin both
structure both
overall ny

raw damn man i DO NOT think ur a newbie at all man ur sik ay if u want in a crew holla at me if u want

I'm pussy LOL

UPPIN FO VOTES

...............
..............
.............
............
...........
..........

both dropped sum hot verses in this battle, came pretty hard...................
punches hit harder from Ny............flow was pretty even........personals too.........multis - ny.........basically raw u didnt caome hard enuff
vote=ny

drop a vote on this.............tight battle.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74622

both were hot and this was i tight battle....crazy for a newbie....and my vte goes to ny cuase he came harder in most areas......

can you guys peep my two battles and drop an honest vote....gameinsane and am at cha

aiight whateva, yall HATE on newbies if i had over 100 posts I WOULDA won that battle easily damn...whateva, yall site is fucked up, Im offically retiring.

yo i would vore if i could but i cant so can i get yall to vote on this battle ?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=74572

GOOD RETIRE

I have seen those punches a million times and I had a newb beat me before so nothing new its just you need to come with new stuff but you still aight

~WON~

UPPIN FO VOTES

..........
.........
........
.......
......
.....
....
...
..
.

Personally I thought I KILLED him on multis the only one i saw was that stupid earthquake line, whatever, yall aint down with how we do in the Dirty-D, Its kinda` new style, youll see eh look out for my new record comin out with Def Jam South "streets aint safe no more", cop that shit when it comes out...Im merkin, no crews just peace...

Vote=Envy

im guna agree wit everythin everybody esle said this kids got potential


yo enve can ya return the fav and vot this dog

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=5&pagenumber=2