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Old 08-13-03, 09:12 PM   #1
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"im stolen" peep this please

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respect to MC dubau for some help on lyrics


im stolen

i forever will be stolen, lost inside my brain cuz im swollen
from all the abuse ive been holden, mostly cuz im bold n'
all my dignity is lost and paranoya has emerged
my virtues were once eternal but now there on the verge
of swaying to defeat jus like yours truly
cuz ive been beatin savagly and left there brutaly
im lost, stolen inside my mind, taken as an infant
my fault, i did this because i was differant
let me explain.................................

growin up was a hard thing for me, its hard for me to change
ive changed for few people, but being mature was outa my range
blame it on my perents that i hate attention so i hide
so mental abuse is a pleasure, beat to the maximen measure, so i die
on the outside and live on the inside, instincs are verbal
rap is my game, but i got missing links like a gerbal
its like im coler blinded, brain is set to one minded
like im lost inside my mind, but i still can find-it
im stolen..........................................
live my life tragicly, i rap hapilly my lifesyle deteriated rapidly
unknown mission, speakin ur best know composition relaxedly
my names gro and u wanna play in my mind
stranded in a jungle, foe thug wit no nines
runnin outa time, and im runnin outa line
shit im runnin outa everything in my damn mind
got no friends, but im fine, i feel confind
sit man lemme try this one more time

i forever will be stolen, lost inside my brain cuz im swollen
from all the abuse ive been holden, mostly cuz im bold n'
all my dignity is lost and paranoya has emerged
my virtues were once eternal but now there on the verge
of swaying to defeat jus like yours truly
cuz ive been beatin savagly and left there brutaly
im lost, stolen inside my mind, taken as an infant
my fault, i did this because i was differant
let me explain.................................

ive lost all feeling, sadness, pain, happyness, everythings lost
so i bottle up inside where i know 1 thing, im boss
my perents molded the man i am, the pain i suffer
in my mind i get respect, there no reason to hustle
im stolen............................................ ..
i hold on i stay stong, philosophy of life: spite everyone
i know its not right, but im hated and what have i done?
im culpable for many things that have fallen in my place
in haste, ive set em to disgrace, tears drew upon my face
it amazes me, how lifes a maze for me
like its changes me in any way posible
its plain to see, im stuck in lifes slavery
the rate, the toll it takes, all the hate
that debates, every day, all the fate
and i canott tell where life is takin me

i forever will be stolen, lost inside my brain cuz im swollen
from all the abuse ive been holden, mostly cuz im bold n'
all my dignity is lost and paranoya has emerged
my virtues were once eternal but now there on the verge
of swaying to defeat jus like yours truly
cuz ive been beatin savagly and left there brutaly
im lost, stolen inside my mind, taken as an infant
my fault, i did this because i was differant
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Old 08-13-03, 09:15 PM   #2
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deep but boring, i felt it was too direct, feeling abit of tupac deepy-ness in this 'ish. why dont we battle lol set it up
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=73133
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Old 08-13-03, 09:17 PM   #3
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damn u jus goin to every post and sayin u wanna battle ok ill set it up dawg since ya want to, but thanx for the feedback, ill pm u when its set up
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Old 08-13-03, 09:26 PM   #4
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Old 08-13-03, 09:43 PM   #5
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Old 08-14-03, 12:50 AM   #6
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still need some feedback.......................................... .................................................. .........
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Old 08-22-03, 11:23 PM   #7
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uppin for the last time please give some feedback
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