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.Revenge is Sweet.
IP: 0684 7861
If you wrote a story on you life, would anybody read it?
Or would it be full of bullshit, half the content unneeded It's credibility depleted by the lies you told your peers Over the years you feared being the cause of all the tears Your own death, would you be mourned or just forgotten With torn chests, lost your heart long ago, it turned rotten Plottin' the crimes that you never seemed to commit yourself Hiding the grim from your family afraid to admit your wealth Would they approve of evil things done just to make money If you knew your kid was buying crack, would it be as funny Com'on Dummy, you think you’re a thug by taking a life What if that life taken was the brother of your loving wife You never knew it but when it came down to it, you were next In an hour, you'll have two holes in your chest over some sex Yeah you got some pussy but didn't know who her man was A rookie thinkin' big time, she was fine but kid, She's was mine Now we sit here, you tied up and me contemplating your demise Don't be surprise if I leave you here to rot, body swarmed by flies Fucked with the wrong guys wife now it's time to lose your life You pick, either I finish off my clip or have fun with the knife Either way your fucked, so there's no reason to pray anymore Before you die, you'll know how it is to be fucked like a whore Turn you in to be sent to jail, in a year I'll get you out on bail Know it's your time when your sons finger arrives in the mail Plan's too perfect to fail, don’t think of running, I'll only catch you And if I have to, I'll just go holla at your little cousin Matthew Slice him in the bathroom, only after he tells me where you are I WILL kill everything that’s close to you, so don't stray too far This is the path you chose to take, don't think I'm that type of guy Don't boast about the lives & wives taken, time to die, so say goodbye |
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IP: 19AF 50C1
ALOT TO PONDER IF MY STORY WAS TOLD NO ONE WOULD CARE CAUSE IT AINT NOTHING WE DONT SEE EACH DAY IN REPETITION.
THIS WAS WELL COMPOSE I LIKED THE MULTI'S(I JUST LEARNED WHAT THEY ARE LOL) AND THE WORD CONTEXT THE SUBJECT EXPLOITATION AND GRAPHICNESS. THE ENDING STILL LEFT ME IN SUSPENCE YOU SEAMED TO KILL THE CHARATCER CAUSE YOU NKNEW THE SET UP WOULD BE FOR A FULL LENGTH SONG.TIGHT IDEA HOT DROP STAY UP. |
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IP: 19AF 50C1
uppin for meta 5 damn dont sleep
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IP: 2730 01FA
yo that was some hot shit thun had me thinkin on da real i see y you named yaself meta5 can't wait to hear more shit from u thun kna mean one
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IP: C11A 89A6
Sick Piece , I liked the concept too it , ur Multies were Great , But you didnt have much Vocab in this piece , Wordplay was two thumbs Up......And you stayed on Topic , Overall Sick Piece man...........................8/10
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IP: E655 47CD
Nice piece kept me interested the whole time. This shit was deep and mean as shit nice work man.
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IP: 9B33 081B
This gave me that "kim" feeling real dark and dangerous. The flow was on point the vocab wasn't real in depth but it didn't have to be. The imagery was the shining point of the song. The topic is a little uh...............graphic and somewhere in the middle you switched the setting and i got a little confused but found my way back quickly so good piece man. 8.4/10
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IP: 0684 7861
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Vocab isn't nesscessary but thanks for the replies... |
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