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Old 08-24-03, 11:29 PM   #1
MiCsYcKlE
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The Catch Peep and Critique

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MiC SyCkLe: The Quarterback

A yo.....

Laying flat on my back with WoRdZ screaming in my ear hole primary receiver covered
but the ball should've been thrown (SACK)
Now facing 4th and 8 if we PLAY OFF we go home
27 seconds left
set just inside the red zone
This team's home
with us down by 5 tells the story (14-9)
60,000 plus hating me in this hostile territory
I'm having a bad game and I'll never point the finger
perrineal pro bowler playing like a 4th stringer
This jersey number 13 was like Kal 'El's might
MAN, on most days I'm SUPER
today I fight kryptonite
Maybe our last huddle and needing a steller play selection
I get down on one knee "GUYS I NEED SOME DAMN PROTECTION"
Star receiver no connection
tried to hit him but interception
White that corner shuting you down
like crack houses around election
Man tell me you can beat him now's the time you needed most
I just got the play selection red right 80, Z post.......


Words White : The Receiver

aight aight ten flat, ima hit it stat
ten paces forward, cut and slash like that
"MiC, how you gonna ask me a question like that!!"/
"look at the number on my back, 21, im gifted
human highlight film, Dominique, call the shift kid"/
hike the ball, its lifted,Quarterback drops back
the runningback points the finger at the linebacker
comin for the sack/
side step attack, attack, i react, instincts cant
blink
split second time to think/
im covered like a blanket, i streak at its highest
peak
fake left, feet hits the dirt like a fist connects to
ya chest/
mental stress, cut hard, disregard the guard
all i see is endzone, dont hear the moan and groan
of the crowds horomones in tone/
defenders feets like stones, im wide open
hit the pocket like a rocket
"MiC lets see you cock it"
im at the 2 yard line, now who can stop it
yo wheres the Quarterback usin that mental diagnostic/
tick tick tick tick tick!!!!!!!!/

MiC SyCKLe: The Quarterback

I'm elluding any and everybody defending
trying not to be a quarterback jacked and upended
Wordz, I see you streaking but these backers trying to serve me
with a fist full of jersey trying to send us home early
But I fluster hard looking a nose guard in the stomach
initially thinking run it
but I juked him and left him flummoxed
WerdZ nearing the goal line in full stride
top receiver is wide open and we still 5 behind
Left hand waving aimless
almost hear him call my name
big time QB even bigger in big games
Here's the exchange:
I toss a frozen rope just like practice
release the ball and blinded by multiple camera flashes
I can't see anything and I'm wondering what happened
I get drilled from the blindside
say a prayer and hope he catch it.................owwww my back!!!

WerdZ WhiTE: The Receiver

yo yo enter WHite, im a front page reciever
football fever, the defender slipped and ima leave
ya/
i see the release, "damn, MiC Jus took one"
hit the crease, the sound of the crowd is peace/
i concentrate on the pigskin, yo fuck that, i wanna
win
but it seems like forever waitin for the ball to reach
the end......zone, number 21 stands alone
but the safety is still free to roam
strong side, yo i dont condone/
quick reaction, yo this is traction against traction
theres the lights, the camera, its action
MiC is still on his back son/
yo i got this kid!!!, i can already see the agony of
defeat in the faces of these squids/
perspiration sensation, looks of devastation across
the crowds fascination, theres no elation
just elevation, gravitation is not in consideration/
its like i pause for meditation.......streak, discrete
i leap, all the sudden its like a triple team brings
heat, damn i thought i had these cats beat/
gonna have to make one of those rare type grabs
like a black man catchin a cab
yo MiC you can put this on my tab/
caught a defenders quick jab, i dont see the flag
so i continue the play, im still in the air son
its like "May Day May Day!!!!!"/
one handed relay, im goin down, defender tuggin
like a blood hound, underground sound
hit the ground, eyes is scoreboard bound/
15-14, the strain and pain is lifted
the crowd has called there own shift kid
just anotha Illcat Lefrak collab thats gifted
thats "The Catch" you shouldnt of miss kid/
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Old 08-25-03, 01:33 AM   #2
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long winded and unimaginative

you gotta actually write to make to read interested from the first line. i really had to push myself to get thru it.

you are struggling w/ metas, but you nearly have the grasp.

i think it would have been more interesting if you'd used more descriptive words.

dont give up!
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Old 08-25-03, 11:43 AM   #3
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DO YOU EVEN GET THE POST

IF NOT DONT REPLY
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Old 08-25-03, 11:59 AM   #4
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i have to say the concept was imaginative, but it wasnt executed very well, overall it was just about average, for vocab, metas multis..6/10....
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Old 08-25-03, 12:31 PM   #5
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Yeah itr was done on aim this morning so i agree could have been better
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