its from a topical battle...^with the above title
done in less than 15 minutes


on to a dirty back alley i was spat from conception
rejecting life i grabbed the rope before the umbilical cord sectioned
unwanted a clear message these streets were mean
my host left the scene stuffed me in a bag and wall, leaned
filthy bricks my only props it seemed till a beggar took me under her wing
but forlong hope is what she brings i end up in orphan homes havin flings
place to place shattered my thin dreams and i graduated to offending
the streets welcomed me back with a sentence but i was back for vengeance
locked up and let loose devils apprentice crime paid my dues
substances abused and accusations of robbing murder and rape ensued
but i dodged blues mamma musta been smart upstairs
but these streets cry in despair i wreak havoc everywhere without a care
its tough out there but my life was a curse not gift
i was misfit to lift the burden on my shoulders width
i wanted parents not this emotions played my mind to death
everytime i attempted a right id end up left instead of paying itd be theft
instead of theft itd be murderous methods that werent clever
instead of being a life sever id rape women for my sins pleasure
its all pain u cant measure this life was tougher tjhan the norm
i wanted to climb back in that womb and become unborn
but im here in this world of scorn not fit to adorn a purists clothes
strip down my thoughts and darkest concepts are stored
im hanging by a dawn of fate and the rope wont cut
this life is too tough please kick the chair whoevers listening ive had enough....

Nice Piece yo.........U had a nice meaning too it , Ur Wordplay was Hot , U had an aight amount of vocab , u added it in the right place.....................Ur Rhyme Scheme was Tight , Multies were Great......Overall this was a Nice Piece......................I give it an 8/10

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YO THIS THE REAK SHIT WHO U THINK U IS
NUTTIN BUT WEAK ASS RYMES HERE U GO BATTLE ME DAWG N CHECK MINE . . . . . . . . . . . .

lmao
fuck off herb

fuck u...

boring.....

very boring,,,,,

You used some real tite imagery, you stayed on topic and set up real quite graphic thoughts on the topic...Your flow stayed strong throught...virtually flawless

instead of being a life sever id rape women for my sins pleasure

That line was real clever...more stood out but that made the most impact with indepth meaning

...Liked this piece alot...Deep

oNe...

Hit up my battles honestly in Front lines...mad slept on