aYo,

U see us runnin wit gangstas on life's tack,
u look but wont find no knifes in our backs
signin blood rights on contracts,
u findin muud ta write yo names on ya face wen our tims find-dat,
smokin goddis and drinkin beer, chokin bodies never thinkin fear

upppn fo sum feedback on this shit

Is This Serious... ?

it's short not bad peice but short can't really say much bout your stuff with just that to go on

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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

WHACK...This was extremely Whack , I wasnt feeling it at all , And next time make sure too post more than 5 Lines..............Because open mic was made too post full songs not 5 Lines..................I suggest that u elevate..........................Overall u get a 0.5/10..........

Yo dawg, I know you can do betta than that. I don't think you really want it.

I Was Gonna Close This...But I'll Leave It Open For Some Merking....

Any Will Be Applauded...

just think if this guy got signed and was all over the media 'worlds greatest rapper.' lol all of us wud feel bumped