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08-30-03, 01:31 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Flash Flood
IP: 62C5 181B
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Topic: Flash Flood Lennox Lisa Devon God Intro.- It’s a Saturday morning (around 11am)…twenty year old, Lennox Harper, is slowly waking up after a long night out with the fellaz. Lennox still lives at home with his mom (Lisa) and his little brother (Devon)…… Damn, its already eleven, I gotta get my Ass Up/ Lisa screams “Finally” and Lennox Asks “What”/ Nevamind, hey…yestaday you left without gettin’ your Tasks Done/ It’s probably cause you were in a hurry to see Monica, That Slut/ I luv ya, but sumtimes you need to mind your own Business/ I mean…I get harassed every mornin’, what Is This?/ I’m your mom and until you get a job, I can also be your Critic/ Sorry, I aint go ta Harvard or get my masters in Physics/ Lisa rolls her eyes and walks upstairs Lennox Thinking: Shit……my lyfe is worthless, its a Tragedy/ Even my moms has tha audAcity to crack jokes and Laugh At Me/ Losin’ grip, lyfe is slippin’ away…Gradually/ Wrong turns have left it spiraling downward…Rapidly/ I now undastand that I can only rely on myself, Instead of God/ F*** it, I’m gonna make my moms happy and Get a Job/ Jesus is a fake, it’s a wonder that Kids Survive/ Fed up with Strife, I think I’m betta off Dead than Alive/ Immediately, precipitation evelopes the ground and the sky, which earlier resembled peace and happiness, was covered in turmoil Lisa yells downstairs “There is a Flash Flood Warning”/ Once again, Lennox Asks “What” Yawning/ I’m serious; the news man says we should Leave Soon/ We live in Atlanta, there is no reason to Believe Dude/ Devon runs downstairs and yells “I’m hungry, I Need Food”/ Mom lets take a minute ta think…and Breath Too/ Lennox glances out of the window and sees families frantically packing their cars I don’t know, he might actually be Tellin’ tha Truth/ Stay calm, we need to move everythin from tha Cellar ta Roof/ Devon, get ready…don’t cry, I’m not Yellin at You/ Only grab your Relics and Jewels, crunk that…I’ll Settle with Shoes/ Lennox pears outside and notices that over 2 feet of rain has fallen Ohh my God, we need to hurry…Move Quick/ Calm down Lennox, lets pray…we will all make it Through This/ How can you turn on me, God, and do sumthin so Ruthless?/ Stop stallin’ Lennox, screamin at tha Lord…is stupid and Useless/ A soft voice from above begins speaking Hey Lennox, just rememba…I neva turned on you, you Turned On Me/ Repent now, that’s tha key…or think on u’r decision in hell for Eternity/ Not only your fam, actually, most worship me and Learn with Ease/ Don’t be concerned with me, its my choice…let me take this Furnace Leap/ The voice disappears Radio: Its reported…Lennox Harper aka “tha boy who wouldn’t Grow Up”/… has been found dead, causes were loss of oxygen…he drowned in his Throw Up/ Good friends of Lennox’s reported that they had never seen him So Drunk/ Apparently, tha flash flood was all a dream, and Lennox neva Woke Up/ Lord, please take care of my baby Lennox, his lyfe was full of Bad Luck/ I pray that you walk with Devon and stray him away from Flash Floods/ R.I.P. Lennox Harper
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08-30-03, 04:03 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 4577 CD9A
good stuff....
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08-30-03, 06:35 PM | #3 | |||||||
Presently Light...Waits
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IP: 62C5 181B
thanx yo, lol, peace, 1
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08-30-03, 07:08 PM | #4 | ||||
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that shit was tight
enveryline kept me interested and wanted to read more keep droppin peace |
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08-30-03, 07:56 PM | #5 | ||||
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IP: FDD6 AE15
I've Had Better... Fairly Weak Topical..
But Your Just Starting Out, So Nice Man.. You'll Get Better With Time, We All Do.. |
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08-31-03, 02:59 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 62C5 181B
nyce lookin krem...its good ta know that kids actually wanna read my ish, and hey yo............sureal, i won that casket match, thanx for tha feedback.....stay real, peace, 1
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<center> Soft Focus</center> "I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss |
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08-31-03, 03:09 AM | #7 | ||||||
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YO THIS WAS A GREAT LITERARY PEACE I LOVED IT FROM THE GATE I THINK THE TOPIC FELL SHORT BUT YOU PULLED IT OFF WELL
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08-31-03, 10:30 AM | #8 | |||||||
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IP: 62C5 181B
thanx Word, for tha feedback, it took me a while ta think of sumthin for this shitty topic, lol, hopefully...i'm dealt a betta topic next week, stay real, peace, 1
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<center> Soft Focus</center> "I'm stuck with...what i'm Stuck Wit, cause i don't Suck Dick" - Jadakiss |
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