rules:

you have until the day ends to drop

10 lines minimum
(no maximum but try not to make it too long)

no crew, hate, or d/r votes
(must explain votes)

if an MC gets 3 votes straight - KO
otherwise! - first to 5 votes!

i drop first..

Actions speak louder than words, so your record speak for-itself!!!!
Being an inapt, daft, wack, ya ass'd still loose if you bit off-the-net!!!! <1>
And chose the voters...see, I take no prisoners, so this is a-slaughter!!!!
Fuck this herb, I'll chop trees and leave your WHOLE FAM WITHOUT A-COME-BACK!!!! <2>
If you had dinner in a youth hostel, you couldn't "dorm-in-ate"!!!!
I'll rip this pupil....post it to sociopaths....make ya think you can "an-eye-elate"!!!! <3> (get it? annihilate)
Like doughnuts thrown at kelvar..wow..and penetrating punches you don't have'!
With three litres of anthrax, yes you'd be sick..yet DEMONSTRATEDLY BE WACK! <4>
SO SHUT UP..surgeon is ya senior.. & like dna..'retards can't unravel me'!
Apart from my shadow..Beeyotch..nobody..NOBODY!!.. HANGS WITH ME!!!! <5>
So you-hyped-yo'-spits,-lied..fool-spited-the-hit-like..you caught me pulling-my-prick-out..
yo' wife(y).. but.. you didn't!!!! If you'd keyed in shrunked gloves..YOU-COULDN'T-TYPE-YO'-SHIT-TIGHT!!!! <6>
Like calometry insulating layers, you need to con-temp-plate
Brain surgeon exterminates, like indian prostitute exports I'll "desi"-"crate"!!!! <7>
AMAZED!!.. You thought yourself untouchable with A DUMB-SPIT!!..
Rolled like J-LO's ass..WHO THE FUCK TOLD YOU YOU COULD "TOUCH~THIS"?? <8>
Like a pimp interrupted..'BITCH..YOU HAD TO BE SORRY YOU SPOKE'!!!!
B 'HADTA MAKE YA' ASS bOuNcE THE FUCK OUT'..like a cheque that YOU WROTE!!!! <9>
I'm-the-reason-you-sleep... the-door-closed-with-a-chain!!!
You-the-reason-thru-Jesus... the-Lord-gave-monkeys-a-brain!!! <10>
Like 'chocolate cake'... my bars come with icing
Battle me?? That's worse than lotto!!.. THERE'S NO 'SLIM CHANCE' THAT 'YOU MIGHT WIN'!!! <11>
Can you inscribe incisions tight enough to replace vector besons?
Because the physical result of competition, with me, must be affixation!!!<12>
My 'flow hadta rip yo' shit out'..like fabric stain removals!!..
Ko'd with this bar..'cause it TAKES "offense" to homosexuals!!!!<13>
This dummy's useless, I'll c-walk your, turf take the earth, and you wouldn't do shit!!!!
You aint as ruthless, your punchlines are toothless!!!! So post, let the voters make you loose this!!!! <14>

--SHYLOCK'S VERSE:--

ay BITCH! where the fuck that come from? wasn't from your mind,
if you meant for that shit to be a joke you forgot about the punchline//

you're so small i could roll you into a small human ball,
pinch your blood out - freeze it and use it for my paintball gun to paint parents wall//

i'm here to pursue to make sure you continue your losing streak,
if brains were muscles - BITCH! you'd still be weak//

i don't kiss and tell - i do what i do and then i analyze,
i could murder you wit so much velocity that even death would get surprised//

i could be a bowling pin - you could be a bowling ball rolling with wrath,
when you hit me - i'd still be standin as your ass got split in half//

next time come at me harder than that - was you even thinkin dude?
well i didn't think so - OH! THAT'S RIGHT! that's cuz you only graduated from typing school!

aight. skylock, your verse was boring. your punches were ok, but nothing stood out...nothing hit hard. your flow was a little off too..

ay BITCH! where the fuck that come from? wasn't from your mind,
if you meant for that shit to be a joke you forgot about the punchline//

this is the Only Line I liked..^^

you're so small i could roll you into a small human ball,
pinch your blood out - freeze it and use it for my paintball gun to paint parents wall//

that was Clever, but you ended it like it wasn't directed towards your Opponent.(paint parents wall....or paint your parents wall...???i dont know..)
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BrainSurgeon. your flow was aight. The ryme Scheme i mean.
not alotta people on r.b dont know what a good verse is..when
coming to that...your punches were ok...you had half your verse standing out, either from creativity to a Decent punch...i could tell
you got lazy near the end and little parts in the middle tho...

over-all...
vote-brainsurgeon...
sorry i cant POLL vote yet. But i aint a NEWB.


Fuckin Sleepers…(Poll)

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2405#post742405

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=76279

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...readid=76274ill give me vote to brain surgen
goodb attle but da newb was weak wasnt feeelin ya shit bs came a bit harder
vote bs
an cud u guys hit my battle up one more vote pc

I liked brainsurgeons better, he simply had the edge on everything, shylock put in a few good punches, a few good multi's but not as well or often as brain....

Vote = brainsurgeon

hit this up, needs two votes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=76734

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