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Old 08-18-03, 07:43 PM   #1
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Twist of Fate...

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In An Airplane Travelling At A Great Inclination..
All the Frustration, Tryna Reach Your Destination..
You Look Down On The World, Its A Different View..
But Who Really Knew, The World Looks Down On You..
The People Below, Standing On A More Stable Earth..
Ever Since Birth, Never Really Known Lifes Worth..
Life Full Of Shame, Trying To Overcome The Pain..
Like Sand Falling Thru An Hour Glass, Grain by Grain..
Glance Over At The AirCrafts Wing, An Unruly Site..
Look Left Then Right, Intensely Burning, The Fire Bright..
The Oxygen Masks Drop From The Holds Above..
Lack of Love, Plane Gets Hit By An Un-Earthly Thud..
The Now Shining Sea, The Planes Position Obscure..
Life Not So Pure, Hell and Heart, Still Not Endured..
Plane Starts Descending Towards Its Watery Grave..
No Lives Saved, For Now We Must Be Utterly Brave..
Flight Lost At Sea, Resting Now By Heavens Gate..
All Eternally Sedate , All From One Twist Of Fate..

-Sureal

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Old 08-18-03, 08:02 PM   #2
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way to capture an emotion we couldnt relate too but hav e thought of this was a good peace ilike how you paintd the scene
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Old 08-18-03, 08:04 PM   #3
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Mad Nice!!..fo real flowed titely, concept was nice but the vocab lacked at times but no major, this was an ill piece..the depth was great..oNe
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Old 08-30-03, 08:18 PM   #4
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Holy Shit Nice Verse Sureal ...

UPPIN THIS SHIT FOR SOME REPLIES...


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Old 08-30-03, 10:05 PM   #5
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This was a nice piece, floh great together, just overall niceness..

Keeep dat shit up, .............................................
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