this is true shit....mine happened last year........Ink's happened a few months ago......here it is....

SmokaJoka666
i was high as fuck when my life was struck and i crashed into the back of a semi truck//
it seemed like luck to be goin down I-75 at 100 plus with three friends in the back of my SUV//
to survive this catastrophe but my friend in the passanger seat died on the scene//
i lost feeling in my feet my body was weak it was 1 month of therapy b4 they got me to speak//
couldn't sleep, when they told me i had three cracked discs in each part of my major vertabraes//
i had to learn the ways of walking all over again because i was stoned like an Iraqi fugitive//
i still couldn't feel my legs when i first started walking i had to look down to realize i was doin it//
i felt like stupid bitch when i was at the crash site and police surrounded, my Escalade was impounded//
i'll never forget Tommy's last words beside me and the horror it's bounded, over and over resounding//
he was higher than peaks of mountains and his last words were.....holy shit...i'm gonna get grounded//

Inkonspikuouz
born into violence could never hold my breath long enough to accomplish silence//
only age fourteen when drugs became my moses my subconscious path for guidance//
"go ahead and try this" i guess the peer pressure really had my mind compressed//
the chosen pill was X grabbed the wings of its dove and soared above the stress//
herion i began to inject,neglect made me a test monkey and emotionally sunk me//
if my life's perfect then africa ain't hungry,i just admitted i'm a former junkie//
although now drug-free,at times i find it so difficult to live a life this clean//
hip hop's my life, my reality, my morphine, i only go asleep if i want to dream//
i mean that i promise everything from InK's mouth is always 100 percent honest//
but half the stories make me vomit these netcee's more doubtful than thomas//
look at chris wallace,whats he achieved when he concieved the image of a thug?//
we both caught a slug,he died but i'm confined to a wheel chair for good//
and i wasn't hood, a crip or a blood, even gang banger or gangster figure//
innocent by-stander,i'm half y'all height now,why does gettin shot make me bigger?//

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lol....FUCK....not even more than one view except for mine...lol....that's shitty.....

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Straight Heat From The Both Of You....

Wow....Im sorry for both of you....Everyone has those hard times...I know i've had mine...God Bless Both Of Ya...

Vocab- 9/10 I thought Ink had higher vocab...but smoka u still straight fire...
Flow- Perfect from both of you 10/10
Creativiness- Well, You were both just tellin yo true lifes...Which makes a great song....Nice choice...Enjoyed Reading This...

Overall- 10/10...I thought this was an excellent peice...Hott...

Im Out
OnE

FUCK YEAH!!...lol...appreciate it yo.....

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that shit was hot...straight up...y'allz were spittin' that crack...vocab was hot...flow was on point from both of y'all...multiez were off the meat rack...content was good...this was an all around hot track...

yeah....coo.....nobody has hated it so far...lol.....

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nice drop

well told from both vocab and flow were good few more multies wuda helped
good message from ink and jokas was tight as well
could see the shit actually happening
good luck with recovering

uppin for more recognition.....

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^^shouldn't have said that....lol

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Straight from the mouth a the lion. Excellent piece I agree wit FGEE, u could actually see this shit happen. Sorry about ur friends and good luck wit recovering.


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alll i gotta say is why didn't you invite me bastads to collab lol nice spit straight hotness

yo nice drop
great flows and use on vocab. I was definitely feeling it. As if I were there. Both came out strong and dropped ill rhymes.
Probs to both.
Sorry bout ur friend and gud luck recovering.

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i read about half of it and it was hot

coo coo.....appreciate some good crit......but this shit happened to me a year ago...Ink is still in therapy....

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