I had to inhabit the streets by force of habit an animal let in the wild-
Give me an inch but im 6ft of coarse im going to take a mile-
It’s called survival- when I needed heat. Was the first time I was saved by the bible-
I aint gods’ rival…
But to you A~DAP means love now tell me if im lying-
When to me A~DAPT separates living or dying-
im ashamed of myself so each day I repent-
And pay for GODS’ gift every time I swallow my pride for a lame 50 cents-
Living better is foreign to me like overseas accents-
The corner hates me the Block is morbid-
Streets is watching but I aint a movie just the torrid-
sequel to trife-
equal in Strife-
if I stay hostage to this garbage they’ll have to find a way to recycle life.
When the temp declines inbetween the incline of the thermometer I flat line-
What you know bout laying on your sheets being able-
to read the DAILY TIMES-For your cable-
They aint no Robin Hood just Robin from the hood-
Slobbin Thompson for a bag of that good-
So when you feed me fairytales I say beat it-
I steel from the rich and give to myself cause I need it-
That doesn’t make me an atrocity-
just a kid who have to live hostilely-
But survive in society’s mediocrity-of hypocrisy-
My life was emptied to compacity like twice my wallets velocity-
And all I ask for is a loose NEWPORT-
then you say you aint got it like im gonna pawn that for something to snort-
concrete athletes im just disabled in this sport-
since I retired before my age-
didn’t honor my contract so they wont honor my wage-
turn the page-though-im willing to sacrifice myself for doe-
but that aint saffice so-the story ends-
with me asking you for money to lend-
AND YOU BASKING IN THE FACT YOU ACT HAPPY WHEN POVERTY IS MY ONLY FRIEND-
THAT JUST MEANS YOUR INSECURE-
and hate me cause i can be free this is how life stays pure.
so who's corrupt-though im bankrupt-
the only hand out i want is a hand up-
they say ORDO ABCHO means order out of chaos-
im persicuted byt he government led by one man another holocaust.

That was da shit.......
Yo that was an exellent example of true talent...
Nice..Keep up the good work
Peace.........................

thnk u that means alot this took more then 2o minutes i been on this for like 40 so id hope it would stand out above my others

I like this piece...that A-dap A-dapt line really stood out to me though...that shit was hot...keep doin' ya thing god...you got these open mics on lock...

i've peeped and responded to a couple of your open mics and the thing that makes this one stand out is the structure......it gives your words feeling....drew me in. Now that dosen't mean it was devoid of wordplay and multi's for example------------

They aint no Robin Hood just Robin from the hood-
Slobbin Thompson for a bag of that good-

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then you say you aint got it like im gonna pawn that for something to snort-
concrete athletes im just disabled in this sport-

these lines stood out not only it which the way they were constructed but also what they mean the newport line man..............i've been there and sometimes lapse back to that mentality. As always excellent drop. 1

THNX

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