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08-31-03, 11:07 PM
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SuM cRaZy ShIt
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Actualist activist academist acosmist acquist actionist,
complex as a chemist with an amorist acquest twist/ I'm an amorist annualist aerialist alienist accordionist file, with a versatile style so vile it's hostile and sure to revile/ Who thinks this is worth continuing on further? Or should I trash it? |
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08-31-03, 11:35 PM
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Any opinions????
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08-31-03, 11:38 PM
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I Like Males More
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continue it man but what is acquest, amorist, alienist, dont try to be smart.
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08-31-03, 11:43 PM
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i aint. i know the meanin to all that shit!
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09-01-03, 12:30 AM
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Umm...
You should write out your whole song.....not just 4 lines.... Becuz this was basically just a waste of thread... So post the rest of it......And then we will post our opinions....If not, then you're an herb.... Im out Check out Mine...... OnE |
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09-01-03, 12:50 PM
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IP: 10B2 203E
Maybe if u post a dictionary of ur rhymes,i can say if is wack or not.but it sounds like iight
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09-01-03, 01:03 PM
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IP: CC07 EC19
vocab is your strong point here (lol same as me) but you need to employ vocab in a sense that it makes sense, not just dash any old fancy word.
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09-01-03, 06:29 PM
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it was ok but try and use those words a lil more separated and connect them with things they all have in common, or incorporate them into the same idea not just random ones, that no one can follow. (rap is for the younger generations), i dont know many Mc's that use complex language that most ppl would just shrugg off.
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09-06-03, 11:14 PM
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dont put a whole line of rhymes down if you used the meaning u would use didnt make sence
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09-06-03, 11:16 PM
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and i can tell all you did was look in the dictionary on the A section n got every A word that sounded alike or had a conjuction of nist so thats what made me think it was wack
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09-07-03, 12:37 AM
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2 bad you don't know what the fuck your talkin about man. i didnt even pick up a dictionary when i wrote that shit. it does make sense if you understand what the words mean asshole
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09-07-03, 02:29 PM
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IP: 7BBC 5E47
Actualist - One who deals with or considers actually existing facts and conditions, rather than fancies or theories
Activist - A proponent or practitioner of activism Academist - An Academic philosopher Acosmist - One who denies the existence of the universe, or of a universe as distinct from God Acquist - Acquisition Actionist - A shareholder in joint-stock company ^All those words in one line makes no sense at all. Come on dogg, rap aint about quotin' the dictionary. |
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