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Old 08-24-03, 04:58 PM   #1
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Me against da globe

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I have found my ambition and have set my goals that are beyond humanity
To destroy and desolate everything and everybody - slowly heading to immortality

I feel it slowly building up, taking over the mighty force of my inner will
Slowly raising the power of knowledge and giving me the spirit to kill

This is the aftermath of a battle still to come, a vision before my eyes
The sky turns jetblack - no longer under the influence of lies

And as the sky is blackended, the stars are turning red
Feeling a cold northern breeze while my mind is thinking 'off with their heads'

It was me against at least a hundred men, as I raised my sword
No longer running from it, but now being perforated by a hundred arrows
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Old 08-24-03, 04:59 PM   #2
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^^ aight I know it's short, but it was just something I wrote
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Old 08-24-03, 06:05 PM   #3
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daaaayum dats nice as fuck keep up da good werk keep droppin shits like dat man nice i rate it 8.5/10 very nice keep up tha good werk 1BoUnC3
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Old 08-25-03, 01:17 PM   #4
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^^ thanks for hitting
it just came out after this fight I had
I felt like I stood there on my own against a whole world
as they were all taking me down
anywayz, thanks for uppin
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Old 08-28-03, 03:55 PM   #5
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hey this was pretty good, nice drop, it had a great flow, vocab was alright not that big but it fit this piece. kinda bruttle and sad but it had emotion in it. i liked keep postin

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Old 08-28-03, 04:23 PM   #6
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^^thanks for hittin this
much appreciated

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Old 08-30-03, 03:29 AM   #7
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nice shit man.....keep up and get better...holla...-1-
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Old 08-31-03, 02:38 PM   #8
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Yeah, i think there's a fair few people who've felt like this before. Whether it's a spare of the moment thing. Or something more constant and on going. Usually passion and heart over rides spirit. It's those who balance the passion/heart with logic that you got to watch out for. For they'll do the most damage on their own...Dunno why i wrote that. Maybe cos it's relative. but still...

Anyway, though there were loose ends to this piece. The emotions were enough to bring the parts that were 'together' to the fore. Making it a short, slightly wide ranging, burst of emotions brought through the extreme..

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Old 09-02-03, 01:55 PM   #9
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^^ I found a lot of peeps not understandin mah piece, but dang, ya got it all the way.
Ya comments are respected to the fullest.

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