5-10 bars...1 bar = 2 lines...
No crew, hate, dr votes...
U kno tha rest...

checkin in u spittin first@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

its like i put a blindfold over ur eyes cuz ur VISION is gone
im the king of this battle ur more played out then a pawn
spittin rhymes youll think it was a pome (poem)
but this is a rap so im blowin out ur mind like there was a glocc at ur dome
im destroyin u wit my rhymes i'd be killin if i had a crazy beat
im bustin you, crushin u like u was fat joe in a baby seat
u think ur seein a win ur VISIONs impared
fuckin round wit me ur likely to end up in intensive care
im takin u out like i was puttin grand ma's teeth on a night stand
thats y the most action you've ever got was from ur right hand
im dumpin a clip in ur mouth so that u can taste my nine
for real im endin this battle cuz ur just a waste of my time

u gonna spit or wut son
ur fathers waitin@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@ @@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@@

^WTF feeble? There was no time limit posted... i reopened this... kid was only a couple hours late... if there WAS a time limit, i'll close it again.

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Calm down kid, I went out after I made this shit...Imma start writing now and post up in like 10 min...There was no time limit...

Here's somin quick...

Fab's "waist is clean(empty)", kid is such a gangsta but "erase-the-heat"//
Shove this thread down your throat so you can taste-defeat//
I'll bake-tha-street, my "heat is unstable" like I "shaked-degrees"// *
Fab's lines are "open" to get "sat" on like a "vacant-seat"//
For tha sake-of-pete, just quit rhyming and you'll make-me-pleased//
You and rapping don't go well together like cake-and-cheese//
Like Cash Money, I'll flip tha "B" to "G"'s and turn this "Fab"-to-"Fag"// **
This dumb fuck be "spitting slow" like his "rapping's-lagged"//
Tha only time you "packing-macks" is when you loading a Mac Truck//
You wack-cuzz, I'll spit this shit "saturated wit punches like a fat fuck//


* "Shaked degrees" like breaking ankles in basketball and "degrees" loses balance or is "unstable"...and heat is unstable like tha "degrees were shaking"
** "B" and "G" as in BG from Cash Money and B=Benjamins=100 dollar bill and flip it into a G=$1000....FaB to FaG...

Let's get some votes on this shit...Drop a link and I'll vote on ya shit too............................................... ...............................

vote goes to tha vision
simply cuz he came out harder, betta punches, betta wordplay and creativity... just overall betta. The otha kat needs to elevate but he's okay.
vote - vision

could ya hit this up wit a honest poll vote, thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78423

Uppin for more votes (1)............................................... .................................................. .....................................

Wtf? Vote muhfuckas......................................... .................................................. .................

fab came iight..only thing is disses were to basic..punches were iight..be a lil more creative..

vision had the betta wordplay.. good punches and edge on creativity...both yall was nice tho but vision hit a lil harder

vote vision

Yo im'a Make The Third PERSON TO say This But Vision came wit more vreativity and "VISION" otha dude elivate

Vote Vision

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=78601

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=78662

Aight.... Drop a Honest One Here.....

vision for some reason shit not lettin me vote........i'll see what tha problem is but could you honestly vote on my battle!.........................