10-15 lines max
No crew votes
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No Hate Votes
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1hr to spit after check in.....

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Damn 100 characters........................Hate that shit

Brooklyn was shook-when he heard that Berg Called him out..
He decided to use all tactics, wack shit, and w/e he could think about...

Brook: "I'm Just that Phat", no need to worry bout him....

Well guess what, u fucked up.... u aint P.retty, H.ot, (A)or T.emptin...
Brook look ya only respected cuz ya record is newb infested...
If You woulda battled all vets...All bets of winnin woulda been rejected.....
Ya raps.....defected......This battle, nigga I wrecked it......
Only thing On my-mind is what-time ya gurl givin me head bitch!!
Shit, fuck it......Its over, time 2 send this nigga to battle heaven...
Brook forever remember the time ya record turned to 70-7....

DO YOU REALLY WANT ME TO REPLY TO THAT?
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LOOK I HAVE 14 LINES SO IM GONNA ALLOW YOU TO ADD 4 LINES, NOT EDIT ANYTHING IN THE VERSE YOU JUST PREVIOUSLY POSTED
MAKE IT EVEN SO NO EXCUSES WILL BE HEARD

weak verse dude......................
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i expected alot more...................

TOO LATE, I GAVE YOU A CHANCE TO EDIT BUT I'LL DROP NOW SINCE THE TIME LIMIT IS IN 2 MINS.
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• Wicked Witch Of The West: Im Melting!!, MELTING!!!!
• IceBerg420: Hey, That Was My Great Grandma!

I'll Stop The Pain. . .Your Never Felt Like Novocain - 1
Clog Ya Veins With A Pack Of Icy Hot To Stop Ya Name - 2
You Should'a Learned, You Get Burnt Causing Your Pride To Rip Tides - 3
I Strip Lies Leaving Your Ego Concerned About Your Dick Size - 4
Reside In California But Murking Online Is Your Way Of Life - 5
Safe Advice Is To Get As Mad As You Can And Weigh Ya Strife - 6
I Debate Through With Action & Break You To A Fraction - 7
I Would Leave Left Overs, But I Already Ate You With Erasion - 8
Confess That You Got No Talent. . .Man, Even The Poor Knows - 9
That Your Potentiality Is In The Closet Hanging Along Side Your Wardrobes - 10
Your War Notes Are Poor Jokes. . .Time To Eat & Wonder Why Your Wack - 11
Reason: Shits Pathetic. . .I Just Beat You With One Line Under Max! - 12

That’s Right Ass Wipe, 96% Of His Verses Are Lies And Crap - 13
When Serving Emcees. . .Stick To Saying 'Yes, & Would You Like Some Fries With That?' - 14

Brooklyn took this but I've seen way better out of you.
IceBerg420 shit was wack.Man you need to get better.

Bigg up to Brooklyn.


>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>ONE<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<

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Brakdown for Ya:

Flow-Brooklyn
Punches-Brooklyn
Vocab-Brooklyn
Multi's-Both
Enjoyability-Brooklyn
Creativness-Brooklyn
Orginality-Brooklyn

Overal-Brooklyn

This was a really good battle somewhat. Ice had a really good verse but BROOKLYN upped it in everyway possible, sorry Ice but that shit was pretty weak.

Individual Breakdowns:
BROOKLYN
Best Lines:
Your War Notes Are Poor Jokes. . .Time To Eat & Wonder Why Your Wack - 11
Reason: Shits Pathetic. . .I Just Beat You With One Line Under Max! - 12

That was one sick ass finsiher dude, props to that and you had a really really good battle, props to still being a the best.

Ice
Best Lines:
Brook look ya only respected cuz ya record is newb infested...
If You woulda battled all vets...All bets of winnin woulda been rejected.....

That was a really good personal, though it is false, try to stick to obslete spits or facts, that works best, you just dident have ti this battle.


VOTE ON MY BATTLE WITH NUTCASE!!

okie brooklyn took this no prob ices shit was pretty whack and i have seen better shit come out of him but in this case brooklyn took it
vote = brooklyn


can u check out my battle getting mad slept on in my sig at the bottom, thanks peace

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Flow-Brooklyn
Punches-Brooklyn
Vocab-Brooklyn
Multi's-Both
Enjoyability-Brooklyn
Creativness-Brooklyn
Orginality-Brooklyn

Overal-Brooklyn


good shyt from brook he took this big....1

drop a vote please...wit ma battle wit me n solar eclipse..1

heres the link to ma battle wit solar...................

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77038

drop a vote please....1....(i voted up there