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Sold..........
IP: 8BEC CACE
Take a look into my life,lookin through the glass
I see my life begin again, from birth,to when i breathed my last My life took twists and turns, and my mind has snapped Writin deep poetic vibes, was my only way to react You don't know what has happened, your judgement is minimal You could say what you want, but that is subliminal Robbin thoughts which those you can't speak As I watch my life again, theres a meaning i must seek Like why I did this, or attempt to do that Why did I come to even try to rap Maybe I could've took a different turn in my life Maybe theres a meaning here I never realized We have alot in common, yup me and you I have a meaning but, you don't know too I look at myself, at what i have become I'm overdramatic, it may appear to some But then my pulse, climbs in speed,i find it harder to breathe I'm panicking,lookin for something,for this pain to relieve But then it mounts upon the top, my heart is turned cold I'm looking for the reciept, for which my soul was sold Rip it up, my soul no longer belongs to myself I sold it, became rich in material things and demon wealth But it wasn't mine to start with, God always owned it I sold my soul to the devil, without his consent I must repent, i know that my time is near I'm worried because its God I fear My judgement hour has become, the subject of today I had a life to live, now its gone due to my delay I lost all purpose of life, and it still ain't found because i threw all hopes of living,straight into the ground My days are gettin shorter, each day im gettin older Take this from me:God sent us as His servants,Do what he orders...
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Yeah definetly a tight piece
Stayed on topic well Yeah this was a good read, liked it alot |
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Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
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IP: F2F3 A4B7
^^ yea what he said
flow was good, topic was not that great in my opinion but you stayed on so good for you overall good drop My judgement hour has become, the subject of today I had a life to live, now its gone due to my delay fav line! if you would be so kind http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=83050 |
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