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Old 09-02-03, 05:16 PM   #1
Accelerate
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Take a look into my life,lookin through the glass
I see my life begin again, from birth,to when i breathed my last
My life took twists and turns, and my mind has snapped
Writin deep poetic vibes, was my only way to react
You don't know what has happened, your judgement is minimal
You could say what you want, but that is subliminal
Robbin thoughts which those you can't speak
As I watch my life again, theres a meaning i must seek
Like why I did this, or attempt to do that
Why did I come to even try to rap
Maybe I could've took a different turn in my life
Maybe theres a meaning here I never realized
We have alot in common, yup me and you
I have a meaning but, you don't know too
I look at myself, at what i have become
I'm overdramatic, it may appear to some
But then my pulse, climbs in speed,i find it harder to breathe
I'm panicking,lookin for something,for this pain to relieve
But then it mounts upon the top, my heart is turned cold
I'm looking for the reciept, for which my soul was sold
Rip it up, my soul no longer belongs to myself
I sold it, became rich in material things and demon wealth
But it wasn't mine to start with, God always owned it
I sold my soul to the devil, without his consent
I must repent, i know that my time is near
I'm worried because its God I fear
My judgement hour has become, the subject of today
I had a life to live, now its gone due to my delay
I lost all purpose of life, and it still ain't found
because i threw all hopes of living,straight into the ground
My days are gettin shorter, each day im gettin older
Take this from me:God sent us as His servants,Do what he orders...
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Old 09-02-03, 05:27 PM   #2
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Yeah definetly a tight piece

Stayed on topic well

Yeah this was a good read, liked it alot
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Old 10-02-03, 02:48 AM   #3
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^^ yea what he said

flow was good, topic was not that great in my opinion but you stayed on so good for you
overall good drop

My judgement hour has become, the subject of today
I had a life to live, now its gone due to my delay

fav line!

if you would be so kind
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