im uncooth a saber tooth couldnt bit mey style..
.my profile will tell you im to wild- listen papa!
they Call my booth the swet box i blaze tracks and turn them to saunas-
You was a trick before.... now you just a hoe trying to blow like PRE MADONNAS-

sell out to sell-neva fall off im to diverse so i reverse and neva fell-
fucking with my acapell-that’s like catching a cold in hell-

i resite 24hrs from sunlight to night life,been fucked with so many times and im still tight-
my flow aboute to set sail-dawg i aint pussy,but you lack lyrical vision next time your compision should be in brail-

couldnt sell on sale-or retail- and you dissen me-
your shit wouldnt sale(sail) in a typhoon measuring speeds of mach 3-

who am i the insequencial m.c.-with the potential capability-to flip words at 4 times the circumfrence of 360-
you want the key- to BLOW UP then get rubber doll to guest star on your cd-then compare-
other then that you the "HE"stuck in nowHEre-
cause you going there-

doing collabs-with a gang of fags dressed in drag n rags wanting to look like tough guys wrapped up like a crab chapter of arabs n baghdad-
callen the BOYS IN BLUE_ when the fake CREW of CRIPS rip clips cause you set tripped claiming bad dude-with thug attitude-on the 6 o'clock news-

what will it take for you to understand-when you on t.v. screamin where my thugs only the fags in prison throw they hands-and show you love-

while my shit so ill the practalogist has to use 6 gloves in his hand-when he does his exam-
wanna test me i hope last night you crammed-cause my IQ is bigger than the norther hemisphere's latteral span-
other then that your beaf is CORNY like a second hand brand of SPAM.

battlen me is like rappen IN HELL cause ill be DAMNED- if you think im a sound weaker then you-bitch i wouldnt sound weaker if sound scan cut the volume of my treble and tweaked the BOOM.

UPPIN

uppin

sevceral good punchlines in this but the flow of the piece was broken because it was diffiuclt to tell where lines ended and began, there was no direction to the piece and a fair amount of filler lines, i think youd do better weith a piece that had specific direction.

above average.

like what JOHNNY examples peace you r critique is vital to me