10 Linez due one hour after check in.......


consider this my check in.........................

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cool same rules as allways rright
no dick rides
no hate votes
no crew votes
no feeding
wha eva

this is my check in

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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center>

<center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center>

Come lets go for a walk!!..but Let productions pick u up after-
My old crew is comedy talk, with u as the pun of all laugter-
another chapter, repeat defeat, Damn This Books' bad this plots weak-
Let it go, Pour your Heart out,..ill watch it stop throbbin as u speak-
2nd loss to me in two weeks. kid Must like bribes attention-
100 of your lines couldnt touch mine so i hand him one for connection-
Affection u yearn but dont worry I know ya daddy chrits there-
What?...Only if u Steal Psalms with divine text will this fight b fair-
Hey!! we do share the love of pussy since i accepted your challenge-(get it)
wow since u came to this site in elevation, youve grown a full Inch-

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i taught this kid well,like mike tyson in classrooms,bribe got cocky n bit from his teacher
head lines ur verse as ill,and ur punches will still even be missin the readers
his weak punches dont hit hard,even if he hit computers hed only leave micro chips
ill kill this kid,n send him to heaven,but he still couldnt have some one sick ghost write for him
let scientist look over his verse,and it still couldnt be found as ill
will battle in a circle,so in this battle bribe can be around my skill
ur punches aint hitin,like kids who settle disputes with out violent acts
you say u have a good record, but its well known as the underground railroad with its silent tracks
spit complaments into a river,and ur verse still wouldnt flow nice
ill post sick,so i would wanna show compairesion,of skill n with ur post of wack verses look like

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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center>

<center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center>

Da punches comin from micatic were way betta.... bribe had flow but his punches barely compared.......
Vote.........Micatic

keep uping peeps done sleep on it................................................ .................................................. ..........

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<center>Mike Albin</center><center>Oct 31,2003 Rest.In.Peace.Homie</center>

<center>Derek Raposa</center><center>Oct 31,2003 R.I.P.H</center><center>Your Both Missed Greatly..1 Luv</center>

This Battle Was Like Whoa....

Punches-Micatic
Flow-Bribe
wordplay-Micatic
Overall-Micatic

Good Battle Yall....

The Fuck?

Bribe Rocked This Shit Easily..
Fucking Hurbs Voting.. Serious...
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actually i think micatic did pull this 1 away...i think he had good structure...better punches....a little more better wordplay.....and some good multi's.....he didn't come with a lot of personals....bribe ur shit was decent...i loved ur flow....but i just feel like micatic edged this one out....yep...so my vote goes to, micatic....

poll vote- micatic....

....yep
....pz

Bribe...some ill structure, some complex punches there

Micatic...your lines seemed stretched, weaker punches but constant

Flow-Bribe
Strucutre-Bribe
Multis-Bribe(very few)
Punches-Bribe
W/P-Micatic
Complexity-Bribe

Vote-Bribeone

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Uppin.....im gettin my ass kicked must mean that verse was freaking awesome dude..............anyways up up up up up


MMMMMMMM.......

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Vote Bribe

Bribe won this easily... alot better punches and wordplay... Mic's lines were stretched & punches were played..............................

iigh lemme break it down...

Punches-Micatic
Flow-Bribe
wordplay-Micatic
structure - Bribe
Overall-Micatic

Juss wuz feelin micatics werdplay nd punches more...
bribe's din't hit that hard...

Bribes punches were direct while Mics were strecthed and semi played.

vote-Bribe.

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