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Old 09-05-03, 11:50 PM   #1
highlander
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it started out to be a generic kinda piece inspired by all the people that drop here or other rap sites and are disappointed when no one gets there shit the way they do. or to the extent they do.

but before i knew it i had a whole bunch of personal shit flowin out of my pen. so i went with it.

its not meant to really dis anyone. more in the vein of capturing that feeling.


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Some might say my rap, lacks the spine of gangsta influence
Tongue tie my lines togetha, like I dubbed over Doc-ta seuss’s

Post boring poetry metaphors, showing off sake of my own amusement
Float mostly topics in step'wit outdoors, or nature station viewing

Every letter Ive givin entry, eventually blends itself into scenes so cleanly
Never leaving seedless things in, feeding flow scheme without no meaning

Snaking seamless streams of E’s, into fluid themes repeatedly
Making pleasing clean routines, seem deceivingly too stinkin easy

Cuz im only receiving brief remedial critiquing,
from people unable of anteing spit up equally
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peace

Last edited by highlander : 09-07-03 at 04:18 PM.
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