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Due within the hour...

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yo its all good good luck checkin in yo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !

^ i don't verse enwbs or get fuckin abused by all other kats, get the fuck out of this thread...
If you want me to verse you, set it up and PM me, i'll drop when i can...

Pce

lol invited i dun give a shit, and what makes you think we are vets, post counts don't mean shit, and as i said, set it up then, you being a fucking bitch, stop ya free-postin and set it up...

Pce

Post again in this thread and i will report you, PM me with details...

CHECK IT!

B-Kast away like Tom Hanks on a wave leaving you stripped and unclipped alone and depraved,
Ya rhymes are played out... in-this-game, even if you spat rescue you couldnt be saved.

You trying to hard to beat mine with yours but you couldnt be sharpe if ya nickname was JAWS,
Ya spitting tooth picks none cut me up like saws, this world is mine fucker it could never be yours.

Ya leaving the water scared with now flow, you up the creek with no preserver and no paddles to row,
Ya riding the rapids going under a no show but ya missing me bitch like a selecta with no BO.

Incryptions left on ya mind hyrogliphicly your lyrical designs are like a fucking mystery,
They dont exsist you see, like ya skills there no frills cheap and not hitting me.

You've gone cold its a shame like David Blaine ima put you on ice,
Ya just no Jimmy Bond spitting smoothly escaping with a Q made device.
Im not telling you twice, you just increasing ya defeat your just plane with no rise,
Chicken with no rice, Swinging swords but unchoppable ya hits miss they dont slice.

I got ya beat like steak hammered down to tender the meat ya lines are thin you aint bringing no beef,
Leave ya eyes blacked like panda's when we meet in the street and after I win i'll eat, shoot(s) and leaf(s).

I just aint week i'll beat ya anyday with eyes closed in my sleep, bringing you zzzz as you countin sheep,
So just peep, this and take my diss to ya heap im leaving you fucked and dropped at lovers leap.

iight beat that.............on form, son on form....

Like fish-net condoms, his crew aren't working and have no purpose//
Cat claims that they Merking Contagiously, when their punches don't even scratch the surface//
My Jagged words kill XL internally, cause he's used to swallow when biting//
His verses attracting contagious laughing, like retarded 10 year old's fighting//
25 years old still text, don't you get bored?, and he's still wack and has a shit record//
This wack bitch couldn't drop dope product if he was a aviational drug-lord//
I'll eat chilis, hang a terd in his ears, so he can have hot shit on his mind//
"Stabs" and "Shots", lookin' like the result of noughts & crosses game by the elderly and blind//
This hoe gets around been here for 4 months, and has had 91 battles, his ass-hole is screaming//
Cause cops more Riding than porn star that is addicted to sex then facial creaming//
Doing his hair is the only time this cross-dresser's clip disperses//
Not yet realised that he is a NO-Body, like open caskets, with empty hurses//

Votes...

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break it down:

complexity: tie, niether had any big or complex lines/bars... TIE
punchlines: B Kast, his whole flow was on point, no stop wit punches... B KAST
wordplay: tie, both had some wordplay yet they didn't stand out... TIE
flow: X4Real, it was easy to read and understand... X4REAL
overall: TIE

B KAST'S best line:
Like fish-net condoms, his crew aren't working and have no purpose//

really good start...

X4REAL'S best line:
Leave ya eyes blacked like panda's when we meet in the street and after I win i'll eat, shoot(s) and leaf(s).

nice line but needed to stop to understand cause of the "(s)"...

thus in tha end, x-tremely close, ...

WINNER: B Kast

jus feelin his a lil more...

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^Up one more time and you are DQ'ed.

Vote - B-Kast

Closer took it.


^You could do better, but nice.

XL, seriously, shorten your bars. Put what you need to say along with shorter bars and the same amount of multies. It will teach you to get to the point rather than waffle around your punches.

pz

yer well its a learning circle aint it................................................ ....i'll have to elevate I supose