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i got 3 bars done...now to finish up tha last 2...

***My Verse***

Releasing-Tha-Flame -Like I Was The Head Of A 'Band Of Nintendos' The Way Im 'Leading-Tha-Game'//
Preaching-Yah-Fate -'Knock You Out' So Hard Gotchu 'Moving Away' Seeing Your 'Leaving-This-State'//(Unconscious)

Swiftly-I-Drop Wakk MC's -Your 'Fly' Lyrics Become 'Limp' When You 'Cum With Feathers' -When You 'Hit-Me-Its-Soft'//
Your Dissing-Is-Not Ill -All Your Doing Is Playing A 'Clock On A Broken Bulb' Cuz Your 'Ticking-Me-Off'//

Your A Fagget Get Off My Dick, Little Bastard Your 'Jacking Off To Pics Of Cows' The Way Your 'Beefing-Online'//
Trash-This Rascal Leave You Absent At Class, Cant Come At Me-Puberty..You'll Receive-It-Sometime//

I'm I battlin A Street Legend dam I ask
who-is-this// as far as {W}rappin you gonna come out
EMPTY HANDED like a lonely BUM-ON-CHRISTMAS//

I'ma Heavy Hitter, you Buntin, so get your REP UP// afta
this loss JACKIN-YA-DICK can't help you keep
ya HEAD UP//

now I got you Thinkin SPANISH, you wanna
RUN-WIT-THA-BULLS// you ROCK BOTTOM & can't
escape so call him PITTiful//

tha Talk of your Town is me and ya crew asking
have you Seen Her// as far as you I neva seen a
STREET LEGEND that's was BITCH MADE like he was
MOLDED by NEUTRAGENA//{cosmetics get it}

each drop I come raw like MEAT STOCK// you small dick
like a PeaCOCK// you can't REACH-MY-LEVEL cause
tha FLOOR is where your PEAK STOP//



nothin personal towards you.........holla!

Aight,

Tonya, I liked your Flow and your Skill was Evident

But im'a Have to say that SL took This ONe

Word Play Tie
Vocab Tie
Personals Tie
Multi's SL
Humor Tie

So i guess Vote SL

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=78601

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=78662

Aight.... Drop a Honest One Here.....

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Okay look, Tonya Montana took it easy as...

her wordplay simply killed it

her punches hit harder, and her disses were better, she took this battle no doubts, coz she a gurl niggas aint givi her props she deserves, tonya took this coz of her wordplay and punches and disses,

street legend had nice shit but not as nice as tonyas, peace

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iigh...1-1
i couldn't finished my verse cus my comp logged off..
well...keep em commin

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hott battle

but i think sl took this

he took it wit more humorous wrodplay and punches

tonya had sum good hits and wordplay 2 but it wasn't getting to me much
hot battle though

vote-sl

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PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

Your opening was alright, at least it wasn't the same basic scheme you see through out the rest of your verse. Your second bar, changes style but kind of loses it because this punch had way to much filler. the last punch was okay.



you're opener is decent and your second bar was kind of losing it. It didn't really flow together well. The third bar seems forced and the fourth bar was all filler. If you would have come some of it out, it would have been a nice punch. Then ending was okay. Some of your punches I just wasn't feeling.

vote street legend

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if i gotta pick a position, i'mma pick missionary."

iigh thanks uppin...

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LMAO!!!!!!!!
good god tonya rips this kids head off

streetlegend...nuthin but weak ass self glorification..tonya punched u wit personals and wordplay and damn thats a sick ass femcee........get tha fuck outa frontlines kid it does u no justice....but really nvm if u lose this battle ....lol that shit was tight lol

oh yea vote tonya montana...but i cant poll vote..jus my 2 cents....dont be herbs ppl read tha BATTLE verses....
good show from u both