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09-07-03, 01:28 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Alexander the Great
IP: 2AAC A401
"Alexander the Great"
Intro: (In and old voice) Since the dawn of time no one has ever seen such a demonic force. No remorse for his actions, Slaying Kingdoms at random, Burning the thrones. Its as if he is committing Imperial Genocide Verse 1: My microphonic magic devouring the half- wit Emcees wit no skill, talking juggernaut, but can't hack it Not the average type to pick up and embrace pen A source of wizardry, like toxin chemicals seep in the skin Giving the power of a hundred sins Created and performed by the lowest form of men The deadliest in rhythmic warfare or so it seems I was given the blessed gift of the divine right of kings To take my place in the city of gold On my throne of the weak bones and the murdered souls Of all those who stood before The Great Providence Testing, not known that their meter was spent Its over, you’ll never rise to my level Spiritual masterpieces written with the blood of the devil Lucky enough to kill me, with a trick you pull I’ll arise and hunt on the 5th like Vladimir Dracule Haunt ya dream waves wit visions of death Rip ya body from its entrails until only plasma is left (I will never relinquish up my crown) Verse 2: Combine Napoleon with the intel of Archimedes Clone a million; march em to a field to meet me You’ll never create enough to defeat me My lyrical knowledge alone could kill an army of many I’ve surpassed all human levels in my mental Sick enough wisdom to disprove scientific principles I’ve existed since the invention of the hieroglyphs Created the Rosetta stone to make since of the shit Inhabitants of galaxies dreaded news of my birth Diary of hells voyage thru the depths of the earth My scripts written in the blood of kings Document my conquest and the villages I’ve seen Over a thousand entries of intense murderous rage Followed by mass burials, innocent blood covers the page I’ve lost my soul, never again will I feel pain Remorse enters not the patterns of my demonic brain (I will do anything to retain my Crown) Just hit me up wit some replies...holla at ya boy... ~100~ Providence |
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09-07-03, 05:25 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: E772 2D41
this was ill,good vocab,good structure,good wordplay,intresting topic.keep spittin.~1~
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09-07-03, 05:37 PM | #3 | |||||||
Just call me your Savior
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IP: E5B4 6C1D
i agree to tha greatest extent^^ not to mentian tha fact u touched upon a topic most people don't do...nice piece...
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09-08-03, 03:22 AM | #4 | ||||||
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IP: 2AAC A401
Thanks for the feedback peeps...nice to know someone is reading my shit and liking it...haha..holla
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09-08-03, 03:44 AM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: F19F D969
Yo, you are on some other shit! That was good, all things considered-wordplay, structure, flow. Very floetic.
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