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09-13-03, 12:32 PM | #1 | ||||||
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Can't think of nothing ... Worst nightmare cursed with this scare that is temporarily Impares our standards when compared it leads to disparity Needs charity cuz the manner of lyrics are layed derranged Brains lack charge and spark and starts to strain conveys No longer flames should of dissuade himself not to create Well he didn't he was just playin so they could spot the fake Fresh thoughts don't infiltrate but he hesitates to spit bars Dealing with a disturbing situation, now sits another scar Dope is barred but it's Canadian goverments, it won't stay He can only show how hes feelin, tiring writing dis-played Hopin these ways don't inurd in his words, he'd go bizurk Can he convert his words so he dispurses so it all purks Up... Another chance to show no mc would let the chance show And also shows whether we reign are lyrcis and our flow I shows control but i've seen mc that fold when it happens Detatching from his skills cuz he feels no longer he rappin Bloated or hunger distraction the brain or other ways Makin it happen, Make it happen... Cuz difficulties don't build character it shows it |
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09-13-03, 01:00 PM | #2 | |||||||
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that is good... it's a keystyle.... dope... good flow, nice vocab, some of the lines were pretty ill... especially for a key.. you should seriously get into audio
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09-13-03, 01:17 PM | #3 | |||||||
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that was good for haven writers block...i liked the starting line..it amde me wonna read on..i liked the flow too it was good...nice job man peace
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09-13-03, 03:27 PM | #4 | ||||||
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good shit i like the flow alot nice vocab good shit
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09-14-03, 02:22 AM | #5 | ||||||
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that was good shit, the flow was there, the vocab was good, the wordplay was kool, and id rate it a 8/10. keep postin and elevatin dude, nice keystyle.
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09-14-03, 06:00 AM | #6 | ||||||
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thanx fo feedback
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09-14-03, 08:47 AM | #7 | ||||||
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nice shit. good for having writers block, lol. keep writing, nice drop though. holla!
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09-14-03, 09:33 AM | #8 | ||||||
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yo this was a nice spit, i felt you was on a higher level in the first 8 or so lines:
Worst nightmare cursed with this scare that is temporarily Impares our standards when compared it leads to disparity Needs charity cuz the manner of lyrics are layed derranged Brains lack charge and spark and starts to strain conveys No longer flames should of dissuade himself not to create Well he didn't he was just playin so they could spot the fake Fresh thoughts don't infiltrate but he hesitates to spit bars Dealing with a disturbing situation, now sits another scar i was feelin them, you was kickin knowledge, good wordplay etc, and the rest was aight, but not as good or as inventive/creative as the first, i like your wordplay most, because you say it like poetry, and it flows good, the structure was fine, good spittin, KEEP DROPPIN...."PEEP MY SPIT "LET LOOSE"....PEACE |
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09-14-03, 01:41 PM | #9 | ||||||
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thanx...yes i do return tha favours
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