******************Good Times*************************

Eviley: The best moments in My life was when i first glared into your eyes

Bash: For you baby I will sacrifice my whole Life

Eviley: your smile was pure illusion

Bash: When I looked at you , It was one of my best Visions

Eviley: we knew that we had too hace a downfall in our relationship some day

Bash: Because inorder too make this relationship work , We Have to Go Through Rough Days , And Good Days

Bash: But I never thought it would happen this way

Eviley: i felt it inside , I thought this love was here to stay

Bash: Baby You Deserve The World, and More

Eviley: Bash It's You Who I will Always Adore

Bash: You Had Earned All My Trust, I was So In Love With you

Eviley: And I would Catch a Bullet For you, If I Must

Bash: Honest and Beautiful..You're The One I Will always Choose

Eviley: You Gave me Faith to stand up When I'd Lose , U Stayed by My side..The days That I Cryed

Bash: You're the One who Kept me alive when I was thinking Of commiting Suicide

Bash: I wanted to Show You how Much I Loved you, This Isn't Just Lust

Bash: I thought we would Stay together Till God call upon Us


******************Bad Times**************************

Bash: When the Moments were Hard..Or When you were Mad
I Remenis Of the Beautiful Things We've Had

Eviley: Baby I always Told u Not To Be Sad

Eviley: Because when words are flowing out of anger

Eviley: these words we speak arent known by a stranger

Eviley: your angry face i couldnt bare to stare any longer

Bash: Babe I am sorry that this had to happen

Bash: Inside I felt like I was burning

Bash: Because I couldnt stand watching you talk to other men

Eviley: U have to understand that they were just my friends

Eviley: i sit here i ponder where did the love go

Eviley: hate caught up to us and our love was so slow

Bash: I Apprechiate All the Good Times We Had

Bash: Even Though Things Were Sometimes very Hard

Eviley: i still miss your smile,your eyes, and your grace

Bash: Baby i just want you to know that you were never a mistake

Bash: When I sit down And think About the things We Did Together..Tears Fall Down My Eyes

Bash: Remenising the days That You Used To Cry When We Had Stupid Fights

Eviley: But Now that I've realized every relationship has goodtimes and badtimes but the only problem was ours didnt stay for long..................


*****************The End*********************

Dope . . I Like The Way You
Set It Up . . Also Good Topic
Please Return The Favor And
Look At My Open Mic Piece . .
Pain of Glares

Thanks......Upping this piece.........STRAIGHT TO THE TOP

Upping the shit outta this

Stop sleeping on this piece

Stop FUCKING SLEEPING...

Lmao................ZzzzzzzZzzzzzzzz

This shit is getting fucked up man..........I might as well stop making open mics

Ok, I Did Not Like The Style At All..
Made The Verse Whack, Some Parts.
Did Not Even Rhyme.. Good Attempt .
and Keep Writing, But Hopefully Improve..

Yeah...That's the kind of feedback I want........Keep them comming , Help me elevate

This was an aight peace. This suffered from a REALLY important flaw. Since it did not rhyme as much, it messed up the pice. I liked the ocncpet just that the lack of flow threw me off. Anyway this was an iight pice

7/10

return the favor on my piece Outlaw

good drop man...i liked how you brought it you 2 callabed well 9/10 1

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The Weathers Art
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Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461