I knew that would get ur attention. ha ha


I been neglected my whole, life ejected despite my
Respective inhibitions to appreciate black and white
So why am I
The one that they try
To bring down, spit on, and stab in the back with a knife
It's my belief, that these secrets that I keep, will open the eyes of people I will never meet
Retreat? I think not don't ask me to be
Somethin I could not, least not someone I don't wanna be
I would never, ever stoop to your level of prejudice
I'm to good for that bullshit, Momma gave me a good head,
To grow on my shoulders ya know she told us to make friends
With everybody no matter race or religion
I was tired a people always na, na, knockin me down
So look whose laughin at your asses, who's fuckin mockin who now



This is just somethin I threw togetha to practice my mutis and
my vocab.
Tryin to evlivate:

Peace.........................................

To bring down, spit on, and stab in the back with a knife

u may want to change this line it didn't fit i don't think but tha rest flowed decently, it was basic wit wordplay but i don't care much for that, work on tha ending, that's suppose to be tha strongest part of a rap, tha thing that says "NOW WAT!"

good though, it was aight

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^agreed, I felt like you stopped short maybe one or tow more bars would have been better. It was pretty basic but again not the worse I've seen. keep elevatin'