you thought you stood a chance but it was all in ya dreamz...
another night the caffeine got to my biological clock through coffee and cream...

I rise from a place where a nun'z fuckin' the beast...
another nun'z fuckin a priest while one screamz fuck the police...
I'm stuck in the streetz awake in the darkness until the sun comez up in the east...

demon'z arise from the earth...sounds of heathenz cries are dispersed...fiendin' for fire to squirt spreading beaming of light on my turf...

dead bodiez...rise from the ground...lead shot me...why ain't I down...
don't have time to think about it so instead I fled from my town...

Jesus jumped off the crucifix and snatched a chain in the process...
Satan came to the projects as shots were blazin' from hot techs...

Prospect Park was dark and it was freezin' in Hells Kitchen...
I swear to myself ain't nuttin' "tell-a-vision" can tell vision...

well wishin'... heart in my hand as I thought that I would fall and lie dead...
I finally figured out that it was all in my head...

I have now awoken from sleep...sweat soakin' my sheets...
hopin' the streets ain't bein' patrolled by police...

no more estamation...I hear a voice from the sky loud and clear at last...
as I scrolled through Revelations it was God telling me that the thousand years has passed...


it's now 5:44am and I felt like gettin' into some deep Biblical shit...lol...but everything was still straight and pure off the dome like an open mic should be unless stated otherwize...I was also experimenting on not using hyphons to show multiez...so see if y'all can find em...lol...

that was some good shit. it had a deep feel to it and were able to keep that emotion all the way through it i liked it

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

^^^thanks dunny...still uppin'...

thats just some crazy shit mang... it was tight,
it flowed, and you was sayin some freaky ass shit man...
nice,
A.T.

^^^gotta rep for da fam nahmean...

yeah tight shit dawgy, it had emotion in it and i like that, it showed nice vocab and the first lines depicted your insomnia nicely, tight piece

that was dope...i liked the topic an the ay uyou brought it...nice drop 1

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

thanks for the feedback y'all...never can have enough ya know...

uppin'...

Yo good drop,excellent vocab and good multiez and usage of relevant wordplay and flips,gangsta rap shit.

P.S yo peep one of mine dawg.

Peace

thanks man...still uppin'...

up...up..and away...lol...

one thread a day, dude..

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