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Old 09-10-03, 12:24 AM   #1
MENTAllY~ILL
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From: BAY AREA
Freestyle>>key Verse

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yo freestyle rite quick

go hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78695

^^
yo im back to retreat wut ive lost/defeat the weak cuase of this tragic game//disstant fame got me tracin cats to rearange this place of fame//i aint clippin bitch im packin Zips of krip an packin burners wit steel grips//its real ou th ere on da streets,fuk dat i use my fist fuk a peice/i got a ak at home just incase i mite end up deceast//in this life of conufuzin//,u a nuesanse to rap //how abuzin is that//its like i got a gift to spill wit ill rhyme schemes//but at the same time im killin cats still chillin at da crime scene//killin cops behind me, leave this pigs raw meat ...
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Old 09-10-03, 01:20 AM   #2
MC B.R.G.
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Yeah, that's nice for a "key"style, or wtf it's called.

Hope ya dont mind,...........


Some of theese rap-cats are sooo wack, they need their heads examined//
you biters styles are dry; they're at a drought and deadly famine//
I''m a feast complete with red-wine, bread and salmon//
so take a number get in line, if you want a piece//
when you grab the mic its like takin' a break for comic relief//
I keep it truly real in the face of u honesty thiefs//
dont talk sh!t fake, to dogs you cant walk with//
you scared like the victims of rapists who stalk chicks//
speakin of which-ask yer girl if my cock fits//
make battlers abort , ejectin like cockpits//
cant stomach the main course? turn ya ta dog food like a lame horse//
my brain force comes from an un-explained source//
and i dont play games or sports//
strictly about the business more than Sermon and Smith//
weak vermin get squished, want respect ya best be earnin it bit$h//


wELL I GUESS THATS ENOUGH OUTTA ME!

Keep'n it tight like nuns
Peace
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Old 09-10-03, 09:16 PM   #3
MENTAllY~ILL
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From: BAY AREA
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WHos this urban bitch.//im curbin his hits//
his words are ubsurd like me splittin wigs//
u just a kid to this rap game im comin viscous//
ill tear u apart like ya crew at da seams of the stiches//
who new id kill this newb ,wit flows that be connectin//
Hydro i be smokin, weed im perfectin ,like cashin this fool//
his head im resurectin,usin a smith an wesson,skillz im blessed wit
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Old 09-10-03, 10:58 PM   #4
Sweet Sauce
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phsychcally fake and mentally i hate/
this wannabe ill nigga/slice ur throat open/
rearange ur strange ways-cuz my shit pays/
like ur moms cooken-u shooken/
spirt broken-bitch u wish u could be like me- u got revoken/

M.C B.R.G - just wanted to tell u ima K.I.N.G/
ill spit at u freely-wnna be G/
dun kno what M.C stands for-damn Vato/
i got ur ass wishin "fag b4 rap" wasnt ur motto/
go back to the suburbs white boy/
ill slay ur innocence-since u had to witness/
Mentall Retard i mean Mentally iLL - hit this...
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Old 09-11-03, 07:51 PM   #5
Sweet Sauce
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another diss on de's cats...

Even if i was a Gay Pasifist-
i still wouldnt hesitate to smack dis bitch/
I got passive fists-
for more massive hits/
Pussy is to good of a name for dis clit/
got his throat slit-
not to mention his wrist/
see what happens when u get me pissed?
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Old 09-11-03, 09:04 PM   #6
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thats fucked up you niggas just free posted yo asses off in his thread MENTAL nice flow nigga
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Old 09-11-03, 09:23 PM   #7
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Take This To A Cypher.. And Dont Ever Post
Battle Links In An Open Mic Forum Or I'll Have
You Banned...........................................
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Old 09-11-03, 10:47 PM   #8
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Open mic aint the place for this...but yeah, nice job MENTAllY~ILL.
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Old 09-14-03, 03:17 AM   #9
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i was feelin it, the vocab was good, the worplay was nice, and the concept was hella good. great post dude cant wait to read more of 'em
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