rules

12 lines
no crew votes
verses due by 2morrow
and no feeding off verses

checking in

i will probably drop in 15 minutes/ hope you can drop today too

Aight Checkin' In, I'll probably Drop Tonite Or Tomorrow Morn'......

& 12 Lines Is Too Short, But W/e. However U Want It Bitch. Holla.

I checked ya profile and found nothin against ya
I wreck ya slow style, aim the pound at this wanksta
Cuzz I be crippin and creepin with heats and clips
Be rippin' deep skin through ya hips and shit
Now keystyle you might have never lost a battle
But guess what bitch? you just crossed ya shadow
and I don't plan on loosing now, but I don't give a
fuck since you were so tight, man, you loosened now
everybody came to see me abuse this clown
chew you up and then spit you out, sip ya mouth
cause I wouldn't let you +style+ my +keys+
if you were holding my cock down to pee

ay am tired and i didnt even try if ya cant beat this you suck kid

pzzz

when the fuck are you gonna spit pussy ass nigguh?

daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaammmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnn!
spit quick bitch

This Nigga For Real? A Crip? Shouldn't U be out In The Streets Gang-Bangin' Or Something nigga?

Hold Up, U From Cali?.........

dawg... the L. BeaCH aiN'T TouGH - Im SiCK eNouGH - to make u "see~sars" (caesar)
like dressin'~for~lettuce, u get - RiPPeD N' SnuFF - for stressin'~wit'~meta's - cause
its WeaK eNouGH - seein' u try to make the best~a~four~letters (...WTF Is Dat Name?...)
fake crip, the only blue u rock is by ur TeSTiCLeS - ur unchallengin'..... niggas only five
be TeSTiN'~U.... ( the A-B-C-D!!!!!) Lol......

AB......
DoN'T RHyME - ur laundry lookin'~dirty, u WoN'T SHiNe - by the time u pushin'~thirty
ya won't oWN LiNeS - ama never loose to~this~germ~G like ur name only goes to D...
cause ur shit wouldn't afford to~be~worth-E (worthy).....a 12 line~rhyme~ain't~shit.... u get
3 rounds left from the nine~I~spray~with - ur wife~I~laid~quick, ur still gonna end up
feelin' my shit after dinnin'~ur BaBeS' CLiT.............. DiCK!

Damn Nigga, I Had So Many More Lines, Fuck U & Ur 12 Line Rule, Faggot.

Uppin' 4 Votes....

uPpIn uP uPpIn uP uPpIn UP!!!!!!!

Didn't I Rip This Cat?.......... Son-Of-A-Bitch........

^ no you did NOT
you arent even great man why you so cocky for? if you win is cause of dickriding and everybody knows that. still upping for votes

Crip

ab/dc really did'nt quite hit that well...you had maybe one good punch...disses were so so..no wordplay...and your finish was terrible...

keystyle first paragragh was good..your second paragragh was lackluster but you had some decent disses..punches were iight..

vote key

^i smell dickriding, get the fuck outta here dickrider that vote don't count
still 0-0, upping for more votes

Vote - Keystyle

For real, both of you. Stop decorating your verses, it doesn't give your punch any added effect.



Sick/SARS lines are played as fuck.


^I didn't get that. Wtf? Wack name flip.

Key won this in my opinion just through the early part of his verse.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77252
^Hit that up with a poll vote.

pz

WTF?!?!...... The "see~SARS" Line Didn't Have Anything To Do With "Sickness" U Stupid Fuck..... It Was Wordplayed "see~Sars"/Ceasar, A Dressing U Ig'nant Bitch..........

& I Decorate My Verse However The Fuck I Feel Like It, Fagboy......

Still Uppin' 4 Votes, No Fuckin' Newbies Like Tha Dickhead Above Me.........

Damn None A Y'alll Muthafukcaz Is Gonna Vote?

I'll Return the Fuckin' Favor if Y'all vote in This Shit......... Holla.

dickryder?? me?? ha ha first off i don't
know keystyle... i'm statin my opinion and votin
like yall want...ab/dc work on ya shit!!