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09-02-03, 04:34 PM | #1 | |||||||
InSaNe KiLlAh
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no need for explanation....read the title....
READ SLOW FOR UNDERSTANDING ~death is rap, even more~ ~tell to darkness in explore~ ~breath held, i open doors~ ~candle lit a taking souls right or left~ ~handle this in death~ ~choose way, which to go~ ~lose always and everything wrote~ ~move passages, pages turn beginnings cold~ ~shivering spine my pen dropped~ ~chilvary and happiness stopped~ ~bittersweet is what once thought~ ~slit wrists, bleeding, life fading~ ~this often gets life all for debating~ ~table to walking, go standing still~ ~able not, thinking too straight keeps it real~ ~labeled plots my kill~ ~standing to couch is close~ ~landing on punches connecting slow~ ~fighting keep, pouring blood~ ~lighting cigarettes calming nerves coming luck~ ~notice what(s) is hellucination~ ~lotus dark seeing beginning desperation~ ~loaded gun is nearby~ ~knowin there is fear lies~ ~going away, turned looked mirror~ ~flowing what(s) is clearer~ ~seeing straight anymore high not~ ~being real i'ma boiling life blazing pot~ in case u don't get it......read forward between every ~ ~ and backwards from the end.....word for word....lol....should be loved for those who understand.... peace 4:20
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09-02-03, 05:15 PM | #2 | |||||||
InSaNe KiLlAh
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lol....damnit.....5 or 6 views and no reply.....
peace 4:20
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09-02-03, 05:55 PM | #3 | ||||
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damn son...this was sick...kinda abstract...and the whole backwardz reading thig is madd unique...creativity at it's fullest...I got a feelinga lot of cats ain't gonna understand this though...lol...but keep doin' ya thing cuzzin'...oh...and can you hit up my 3 latest open mics?????? They called "the truth ft. Enhance"
"4:12am(living in death)" and "cleptomaniak'z fantasy"...thanks man...holla... |
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09-02-03, 06:03 PM | #4 | ||||
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Liked the backwords thing nice creativity, nice drop....
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09-03-03, 02:42 AM | #5 | ||||||
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That was a sick drop bro....................
Keep up the good work...................... PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~> |
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09-03-03, 02:18 PM | #6 | |||||||
InSaNe KiLlAh
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yeah...the basis is a guy is high and he is hellucinating....check it......
~lose always and everything wrote~ ~move passages, pages turn beginnings cold~ ~shivering spine my pen dropped~ ^^trying to write while high.... ~standing to couch is close~ ^^standing to couch is close.....he sits ~notice what(s) is hellucination~ ^^basis of story ~going away, turned looked mirror~ ^^he looked to the mirror....while he was walking away and turning should take care of some confusion..... peace 4:20
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09-03-03, 02:19 PM | #7 | ||||||
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i don't have enough braincels to comprehend that....lol
nah raw sawn liked the style lil complicated but i got it holmes.... vocab was off but still all the ish was hot... ones |
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09-03-03, 02:19 PM | #8 | ||||||
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ILL SHIT Finally some worthy Open Mics i read.................
How u used the creativeness is wonderfull man |
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09-03-03, 02:22 PM | #9 | ||||||
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Yo Inventive dawg,liked alot of tha wordplay and abstract is a good word to describe this,alot of quotable lines,but most of tha peice was on balance good.
I'd give this 8.5/10 dawg. Peace,yo hit mine up plz. |
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09-03-03, 02:25 PM | #10 | |||||||
InSaNe KiLlAh
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coo coo....appreciate it.....vocab had to be weak in this though....hard to talk backwords with big words...lol.....
peace 4:20
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09-03-03, 02:27 PM | #11 | ||||||
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lol uppin for my anerxic cat her named sabastion
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09-03-03, 03:57 PM | #12 | |||||||
InSaNe KiLlAh
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^^name is not sabastion.....lol
peace 4:20
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09-03-03, 05:00 PM | #13 | ||||||
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like everyone else said it was tight nice work
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09-04-03, 12:57 AM | #14 | |||||||
InSaNe KiLlAh
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^^think ur just trying to get posts up......
peace 4:20
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09-04-03, 01:33 AM | #15 | ||||||
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man hot shit here, never seen that before, its like a fuckin murder mystery or somethin. nice references to the mirror, with the mirrored verse and shit. like the (S) hallucinations and shit. nice work could this possibly worthy of legends?
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