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IceBerg420 4 44.44%
Bare Knuckles 5 55.56%
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Old 09-10-03, 03:29 PM   #1
Bare Knuckles
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Bare Knuckz vs. IceBerg420

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Rules:

- 16 lines minimum.
- 24 lines maximum.
- First to five votes (as usual).
- Come dope.
- No feeding.




Good Luck, Berg.
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Old 09-10-03, 06:10 PM   #2
IceBerg420
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BK quick to flip his lip and talk shit like he dont give a fuck,
His played Punches been stripped 'naked' swingin them 'Bare' knucks..
Are U scared or what? then drop a verse worthy of readin,
Bare spits like vet mirages, his hooks can be decievin..
Punchlines receedin.... worse than ya fucked up hairline,
Bare Knucks gets more sticks in his butt than a porcupine..
Be a sport, resign....I'm the kind of killa who'll leave ya hunched Punk,
Cuz that wack shit u throwin at me 'movin kinda wobbly'.. must be 'Punch drunk'..
And who woulda thunk that Bare knucks would 'suck' like he do,
I mean I've heard stories....But I didn't think them 'F.A.G.s' were tellin the truth..
I mean c'mon Bare, where did u get this crazy idea of beating me?
U couldnt beat me even the drop time for this battle was a whole centurey.. (100 yrs)
And u wonder why people read ya verse, but dont get the chuckles,
If you wrote that wack shit..... just admit it Bare knuckles!!

Bk: "Yes... its me-Bare Knuckles" I confess I did it (LoL check sig)
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Aight back to business....back to servin this herb in my merk kitchen,
Cuz Bare hittin 'fowl balls', like he was punchin 'testicals of live chickens' ..
His verse? its just slim pickens....I guess my plot thickens,
I had "Great Expectations" for this bitch, like Charles Dickens.. (Great expectations a novel by C.Dickens)
But he lemme down...And man it's sad to see,
Bare knucks fucks up more 'battles', than 'scary cavalries'...
You a casualty....A Victim left dead out in the sun,
Son u've been sonned in this battle in more ways than 1...
Now its done, Game Over...Bare knuckles feel the pain,
Cuz U fit wit losses like losses fit wit u....ya'll 1 in the same..
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Old 09-11-03, 03:07 PM   #3
Bare Knuckles
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I'll post today or Sunday, got a lot of important (yet hectic) school shit going on.


Don't fret though, I shall post soon.
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Old 09-11-03, 03:56 PM   #4
Bare Knuckles
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"This match is the shit!" but fuck that - I’m grabbing the win,
What? You’re like.. twenty years old and acting a pimp!?
C’mon, that’s depressing - so I’ll beat your wretched lines,
And you’re battling a 14 year old.. c’mon, you need to get a life.
Your avatar is important - so I’ll say these things for the win,
Since "X marks the spot", watch me swing for your chin.
The things that I did are ill - so nothing’s touching my tactics,
Considering I hit IceBerg’s harder than the fucking Titanic.
But here’s where I rewrite history - and now this shit is reeling,
As you’re the one who’ll BOW down with that sinking feeling.
I’m the illest, feel me? You shouldn’t be here in the first place,
And the only thing that’s shook Cali’s foundations.. is earthquakes.
My words break ya skull - so here’s the trouble I’m calling:
It’s a joke your losses have near DOUBLED your win column.
From the rubble that’s falling - I see you’re dancing with death,
While your brain cells....... out at any chance it can get.
You’re rapping ’til death!? I hope you can handle the stress,
But hell; don’t worry - at LEAST you’re a faggot at BEST.
I’ll stand on your chest, cause no one fucking trusts this fool,
And the only time I below average is when I’m uppercutting you.
And since my fists are golden tipped - you shall never win,
So I’ll break open your chest... just to put put this treasure in.
Your flow sucks, you got no multies, your lines are flawed,
And finally - IceBerg’s a MISFIT - but hey - one size fits all.
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Old 09-11-03, 05:55 PM   #5
IceBerg420
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Good shit lets get some votes in here...........................................
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Old 09-11-03, 06:16 PM   #6
J Nice
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man, both sides where nice
Aight back to business....back to servin this herb in my merk kitchen,
Cuz Bare hittin 'fowl balls', like he was punchin 'testicals of live chickens' ..
1-icebergeI had "Great Expectations" for this bitch, like Charles Dickens.. (Great expectations a novel by C.Dickens)
2-iceberge

Cuz U fit wit losses like losses fit wit u....ya'll 1 in the same..
3-iceberge

And the only time I below average is when I’m uppercutting you
1- knucks
You’re rapping ’til death!? I hope you can handle the stress,
But hell; don’t worry - at LEAST you’re a faggot at BEST.
2-knucks

Your flow sucks, you got no multies, your lines are flawed,
And finally - IceBerg’s a MISFIT - but hey - one size fits all.
3-knucks

knucks word play was a little stronger.
it was healla tight, but i must vote for bare knuckles
 
Old 09-11-03, 08:00 PM   #7
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Old 09-11-03, 08:11 PM   #8
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I liked your finishing line about the one size fits all. I think bare knuckle wasn't finishing her punches with enough words and it kinda fucked up her flow.But she did have some good rhymes and creativity.

I think misfit had some dope punches and a good flow.
 
Old 09-11-03, 08:29 PM   #9
IceBerg420
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^What the fuck u been smokin dunny.......................................
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Old 09-11-03, 09:00 PM   #10
Young P
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Merk... dats all i need ta say......
Punches, Flow, Momentum... all goin ta.....
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ICEBERG!
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Old 09-11-03, 09:07 PM   #11
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Vote - IceBerg........

Good Battle, but He just came with it............. Flow, Punches, Metas......... really ripped That Shit Up.........

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Old 09-11-03, 09:16 PM   #12
Aisle Phive
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My Vote... Bare Knuckles


I liked his verse a lot, he had some good personals and decent wordplay, ice i really wasnt feelin ya verse this time out, i usually always feel ya verse, not this time.
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Old 09-11-03, 09:16 PM   #13
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Old 09-11-03, 10:18 PM   #14
IceBerg420
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Good deal.............Uppin............................ ....................................
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Old 09-11-03, 10:23 PM   #15
Derive
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iight....good battle...heres the layout

punches-ice
flo-ice
structure-ice
style-ice
vocab-ice
overall-ice


iceberg took this one...BK elevate man...dun wry...ull get better

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