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BROOKLYN 0 0%
Tha Remix 5 100.00%
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Old 09-12-03, 12:10 AM   #1
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The Remix Vs BROOKLYN (150 posts plus to vote)

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Rules Are:
No D/R Votes
No Hate Votes
No Crew Votes

I'll spit first don't feed

150 plus posts only to vote

THOROUGHLY EXPLAINED VOTES ONLY like:

Flow:
Punchlines:
Wordplay:
Metas:
Multis:
Overall:

Plus your overall opinion which should be atleast 3 sentences long

Check in Brooklyn
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Old 09-12-03, 06:00 PM   #2
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Ight man i'm here and ready for battle.............. i'll spit in like 10 minutes...... ALSO other rules are:
Camarac Can't Vote
RicoChet Can't Vote
Bone Crusher Can't Vote
Content Can't vote

is that cool wit u brooklyn?
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Old 09-12-03, 06:50 PM   #3
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...::: 3rd Degree Burn :::...

"Sprayin" rhymes at you that have so much "flow" you're "pupils" are "drowning"//
Venom fullfilling your veins your "lifeline" is down to "two lines" and "counting"//
Bitch ass throwin' weak punches while i "pounding" ya lyrics down as if they was "salt"// (pound salt)
Red eyes of anger spittin lines waitin for the right time to bring you down to a hault//

...:::Brooklyn it's over homie:::...

Cock-my-glock wit my lyrical uzi-cocked three four-shots will blaze you and ya-block//
Retaliate and "smoke" u like a pound of "rocks" your rhymes need to be "cut" like old jamaican "dreadlocks"//
Spittin shots in the dark i ain't no mutha fuckin organized battle emcee//
I'll fuck you up and stoop so "low" you'd think i'd get a reversed "nosebleed" //
Guilt plowin thru ya mind knowin u won off fuckin ya dickriders in the locker//
You "milkin" them "cats" as if your name was "Gaylord Focker"//
^
(in the movie meet the parents ben stiller plays gaylord focker and was accused of milking his fiance's dad's cat) LMFAO!
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Old 09-14-03, 01:14 AM   #4
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You Got Candy Rhymes, You Wish You Had Ya Hand In Mine
Cus Ya Dandy Lines Kiss More Ass Than J Lo's Panty Line
You A Newbie Kid Plus We Got Hunches This Herbs Gay
Cause You Still Do This " " To Connect Ya Punches And Wordplay
Fight Me Through And Just Surrender. . .It's What You'll Likely Do
My Punches Get Lighted Too And Burn This Asshole Like Spicy Food
You A Waste Of A Verse, Curse And Still Dumb With Ya Best Lines
Play Limbo With The Grim Reaper & You Couldn't Win Under The Dead Line
Defeated Fed Ex, Played Punches Are Soon Over So You Can't Deliver Another
*On Your Knees* More Than Wounded Soldiers, No Wonder You Always Head'n For Cover
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Old 09-14-03, 01:27 AM   #5
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Metaphores - BROOKLYN
Vocabulary - neither
Enjoyment - BROOKLYN
Punchlines - BROOKLYN
Wordplay - BROOKLYN
Creativity - BROOKLYN
Personals - BROOKLYN
Structure - BROOKLYN
Finisher - BROOKLYN
Opener - tie
Multies - BROOKYLN
Flow - BROOKYLN
Overall - BROOKLYN (10-0)
 
Old 09-14-03, 02:09 AM   #6
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Metaphores - BROOKLYN
Vocabulary - The Remix
Punchlines - BROOKLYN
Wordplay - BROOKLYN
Creativity - BROOKLYN
Personals - BROOKLYN
Structure - The Remix
Finisher - The Remix
Opener - The Remix
Multies - BROOKYLN
Flow - BROOKYLN
Overall - BROOKLYN

Anyways No Hate Crazy Battle Unfortunately I dont know why eventhough I have 100 plus posts somehow I still cant poll vote when I try it says I haven't posted my explenation yet anyways if a mod or admin see's this please give my vote to brooklyn...
 
Old 09-14-03, 03:05 AM   #7
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^^this shit is fuckin sad yo....lol...aight check it....

u both had some tight shit....Remix had better complexity...more punches....and his punches weren't played.....Brooklyn's punches were good but i can remember three just off the top of my head that are played (any type of J-lo line, Fed Ex Line, or Spicy Food lines)....<<if u would've used those last year...u would'a got this battle....but Remix had more updated punches....better complexity....more multis....u both equaled up in wordplay....and Brook got it with flow.....other than that...Remix had this shit all the way....

Multis - Tha Remix
Metas - Tha Remix (none were played)
Wordplay - Tha Remix (^^same as above)
Complexity - Tha Remix
Violence - Tie
Flow - BROOKLYN
Creativity - Tha Remix
Vocab - Tie

Check my shit with XL4REAL in the Elite...sorry i don't have an link......

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Old 09-14-03, 12:16 PM   #8
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Punchlines:remix
Wordplay:remix
Metas: remix
Multis:remix
made me laugh more:brooklyn
structure:brooklyn
vocab=they seemed tied
complexity=brooklyn
flow=brooklyn
creativity=remix

Overall:remix

there yopu have it i wasnt feelin remix flow but still his punches gave him the win to me
 
Old 09-14-03, 12:35 PM   #9
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Originally posted by SmokaJoka666
^^this shit is fuckin sad yo....lol...aight check it....

u both had some tight shit....Remix had better complexity...more punches....and his punches weren't played.....Brooklyn's punches were good but i can remember three just off the top of my head that are played (any type of J-lo line, Fed Ex Line, or Spicy Food lines)....<<if u would've used those last year...u would'a got this battle....but Remix had more updated punches....better complexity....more multis....u both equaled up in wordplay....and Brook got it with flow.....other than that...Remix had this shit all the way....

Multis - Tha Remix
Metas - Tha Remix (none were played)
Wordplay - Tha Remix (^^same as above)
Complexity - Tha Remix
Violence - Tie
Flow - BROOKLYN
Creativity - Tha Remix
Vocab - Tie



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Old 09-14-03, 01:24 PM   #10
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Multis - Tha Remix
Metas - Tha Remix
Wordplay - Tha Remix
Complexity - Tha Remix
Flow - BROOKLYN
Creativity - Tha Remix
Vocab - Tie

Very good battle, both had great verses i thought, but i liked Remix's verse more so my vote goes to remix.
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Old 09-14-03, 01:27 PM   #11
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i dunno.............gotta give this to brook............punches hit much harder.............multies were SICKER................and meta's were better
Someya lines didnt make sense remix..............and you had a good amount of filler...............brooks punches musta left ya face black and blue afta this one.............C'mon now, how u winnin this battle? and claiming he is d/r you? no beef or hate playa but his verse was at least 2 Grades betta than yours (6 - 8 lets say)
Remix your wordplay was iight but nothing special, brook beat you in that aspect to..................and he easily wins this.........i think your voters might be d/r you...........but no beef man, great drop.............no hate neither just tellin this shit like it is

vote-brooklyn
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Old 09-14-03, 01:33 PM   #12
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thanks for the votes y'all good battle brooklyn............. Meks.... i don't d/r i just got online and saw it at 2-4 till u voted so don't accuse me of it!........ 2 grades better than mine? whatchu smokin? uppin for votes
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Old 09-14-03, 01:41 PM   #13
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dis was a str8 battle..but brook i think u went too easy on him...what happened? anyways..guess i need to break this down


Punchlines:remix
structure:brooklyn
flow:brooklyn
Wordplay:remix
complexity:brooklyn
Metas: remix
Multis:remix
vocab:brook
creativity:remix

overall:remix
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Old 09-15-03, 12:54 AM   #14
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this battle was pretty close i'd have to say that both sides came pretty good with punches this is how the battle broke down in my eyes

punches- brooklyn
flow=brooklyn
metas=remix

so in the end my vote is for brooklyn

What the... the last post was almost 12 hours ago... you had to have been LOOKIN for this battle... vote taken away... just doesn't seem fair to me.
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Old 09-15-03, 01:01 AM   #15
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OK, i deleted all the freeposting... and there was a lot of that... polled northern touch's vote and took away nucca's quoted vote.
UPPIN for a final vote.
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