aiyo...
I have come to realize... that there are......
a lot of STUPID PEOPLE..............................
they have NO common Sense, and they bug
the living fuck outta me...

aiyo,

When you see me on the street, flowin to a beat, dont ask me for a battle... (its common sense)
When I'm tryin to get something to eat and Im at burger king, dont ask me for a battle... (its common sense)
When I'm workin on the job, tryin to get to the top, dont ask me for a battle... (its common sense)
If I think your worthy of a battle, I let YOU know,
cause its only (common sense)

aiyo...
Honestly, I aint the smartest motherfuckker on the planet,
but I got what you'd call common sense, so in life I can handle it,
I dont take damage, I'm the one who inflicts it,
so the next time you thinkin bout askin for a battle, find the silly rabbit and battle for some trix kid, I mean shit.... I aint havin it...
I flow bout real shit, I aint in to all that battle rappin.
I'm inconsiderate, relapsin and evolvin into the devils advocate,
retrackin and fallin into another labryinth when I'm tryin to get outta debt... I'm out for respect,
and I aint plannin to get it by dissin you, I'm just straight dismissin you and endlessly deplinishin you of every one of your spit and spews.
so when I quit... IM THROUGH... I aint gonna keep sayin it.
So talk that bullshit to another mother fucker that will take it...
Most people miss the entire concept of rap, its an art...
I've had 5 clinical studies on me, and still no-one can read my heart.
I was disease from the start, with this art to make people fall apart, and discinagrate their name when I make em fall of the charts...
I'm droppin more than just bars... theres a hidden message in this shit,
With the motive of hate, I motivate with my spits,
Show the fake that theres no playin when I say I'm legit...
so go to the bank and rob it blind-and step out side-into the sight of a thousand guns lined-to cap your ass on signal...
all in all, heres what I'm sayin... you gotta have common sense fool!!!!!!!!!!



HIT ME UP WIT WHAT YALL THINK OF THIS SPIT... it was closed cause I posted more than one... but I thought it was dope so I had to repost it... i hope I dont get booted for this shit...

the only reason i read this was to make sure you didn't bite my rhyme from a while back... and you didn't... i like this, at some points... some a'ight multis.. good vocab, some bars seemed forced.. but it's pretty good... 1

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this was good, solid drop

i liked some lines more then others, mainly cos i think they were structured better and flowed better:

I'm droppin more than just bars... theres a hidden message in this shit,
With the motive of hate, I motivate with my spits,
Show the fake that theres no playin when I say I'm legit...

this was nice, the content was good, although the rhymes were obvious, the content made them more original,

i think you could improve on spittin on more of a structure, cos i did nt feel the lines had any limits to them:

retrackin and fallin into another labryinth when I'm tryin to get outta debt... I'm out for respect,
and I aint plannin to get it by dissin you, I'm just straight dismissin you and endlessly deplinishin

had these lines, and you also had these sized lines:

so when I quit... IM THROUGH... I aint gonna keep sayin it.
So talk that bullshit to another mother fucker that will take it...
Most people miss the entire concept of rap, its an art...

BUT YO, content and wordplay wise, i would say you strong, i would like to see other spits from you that concentrate on the other things,

NICE DROPPING, keep at this, you got mad ability,

and yo i told you i would give you feed, peep my spit "let loose",

PEACE

aight... begin... that was feed back... thank you...
and blunt... just so you know... i DONT bite, and never have.
but thank you for your feedback, i preciate it alot.
aiyo people... I'm still uppin for feedback...
A.T.

STILL UPPIN FOR FEEDBACK

good shit, i liked readin it, i aint to much into battles either so i know what ur sayin. vocab was good, content was fine, and wordplay was awesome. keep postin dude i enjoyed readin that.

ha ha felt this was some DMX shit, nice drop, extremely good flow liked it, keep droppin...

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this was pretty dope i liked the comment and the wordplay and mulies were coo. i'd work on ya structure though cuz in text cats can't seem to understand a flow if you don't basically spell it out for them. it was a hot verse though and there ain't really much to knock except the structure keep doing ya thang.

BLUNT HIT IT RIGHT but i like this none the less it was illness.stay up fam your structure seams a lil similar id like to here audio for his

this shit was hot son...rep the Omens fam well...keep doin' ya thing baby...you had some creativity within' this verse...

I think this would of been very nice on audio because you in typed out al theeffects and i saw where you was coming from, your lines could of been even out a bit so the flow was a bit better and beter structure...

blahblahblahblahrhyme
blahblahblahblahrhyme

but even if every line doesn't rhyme it don't matter

blahblahblahblahblah
blahblahblahblahrhyme
blahblahblahblahblah
blahblahblahblahrhyme

The concept was nice...and some good lines...

hahha.... that was some hot shit, u had a wide vocab, loved the concept keep it up

I appreciate the props yall...
A.T.

some kids dont got common sense. i like how u came with this strong kicko. for real keep writin