in stark contrast to my usual display of overbearing performance
i refuse to gorge on my inner need to mold to conformance
and though at times my views and thoughts may be distorted
my opinion matters DAMMIT what i thinks important
for those who blow me off and dismiss me as just another NIGGER
think long and hard about who YOU are not so hot now mister?
i've been kicked when i was down broken and defeated
to the brink i've layed dangerously till i retreated
i believe i am the best at times but am not conceited
imagine if this was how ya kids was treated

lets go

Verse 1

i'm not violent but by no means do i keep the peace
i've felt the streets and seen peeps lay deceased
theres no wisdom in the loss of human life
when will my people finally see tha light and get it right
my anger at these tormented and demented foes
whose only quest is to divide my people and multiply my woes
froze i lay in the depths of this cold mortuary
stop to compose what i emote cuz this pain is so scary
imagine a world free of death and destruction
fuck it i'd give a nut to see my block a step above disgusting
i'm sick of listening to guns busting back to the above discussion

chorus/style switch:
sick of this lack of intelligent thought cats caught
to many thought that the price is based on what ya bought
courts full overturned judicial system wishes turned to riches
back to rags and our daughters missing think and listen
then speak.
those who want enlightment have a seat and make a difference

Verse 2

spoken word content lyrically deserved worked my nerves
barely seen and for the most part unheard
part the sea to reach and touch the dead sea scrolls
acid memories leak and i stoop to beseech these trolls
a mystic ocurrence is occuring skill level opened is emerging
watch as this humble man grows flow burgeons
add a shot of bourbon and suddenly its perfect
take a journey as we search the murky skies
hidden eyes this bodies my mortal disguise
lurking in mystic purpose purchase perchance
hurts this cryptic circus focused on the greed of heartless merchants
and on the song plays as we all drown in sorrow
today was fucked up can't wait until tommorow


chorus/style switch:
sick of this lack of intelligent thought cats caught
to many thought that the price is based on what ya bought
courts full overturned judicial system wishes turned to riches
back to rags and our daughters missing think and listen
then speak.
those who want enlightment have a seat and make a difference

as i journey holding this piss pot i spit on hip hop
spoke blasphemous born to get shot
see gangsta talk about drugs and millimeters
not me i just chill and keep and ill demeanor
i wanna see if the grass on tha otha side is greener
not a leader but not exactly a follower either
i strain my brain to focus on what really matters
though i'm torn and tattered tragically splattered
i revolve around rap like the rings of saturn
see the pitter patter pitifully broken battered
imagine crimson mist dripped from wrists slit
each of us lives in the dark dank abyss
so excuse me miss if i'm remiss in stating this
words ain't shit so fuck your diss..............1



3 different beats and no real topic just off tha top of my head

yo son this was mad raw your vocab amplification is unimaginable you began so raw son im feeling you no doubt stay doing your thing twin.

that shit was awesome, vocab couldnt have been better, and that shit was just great. keep postin dude.

as i journey holding this piss pot i spit on hip hop
spoke blasphemous born to get shot
see gangsta talk about drugs and millimeters
not me i just chill and keep and ill demeanor
i wanna see if the grass on tha otha side is greener
not a leader but not exactly a follower either

was pretty dope had some okay vocab but the flow was alright. keep working at it dawg you'll elevate.

up up and away

that was some hot shit,
u had a wide vocab, loved
the concept ~~~~~keep it up

uppin