Wrote This 5 Minutes In School For
A Track Im Recordin Wit My Boy

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Kids Livin In.. Life Dont Express They Gangsta Images..
Fakes Relate To Imprisonment, Yet No Nothing Of What A Prison Is..
Its Imminent, They Put It On Record N' Pop Shit..
Not-Logic.. Just Get The Facts Lectured On Topics..
They Think They Hott Shit w/ Hands In Pockets, Its Useless..
Hard Talkin Students But Cant Learn So They Burn Out Exuses..
21st Century Got Me Adventuring Un-Relentlessly w/ Reasons Worth Reasoning..
Seeminly, People Are Leanently Too Weak To Reach For Things..
Act Like Shit Gunna Come For Free Bitch..
"Ima Shoot You Wit My Glock Watch".. Please Bitch, Enuff Of Tha Mean Shit I've Already Seen This..
So Shed sum Blood, Kill A Crip, Trip A Hoe, Smack A Bitch..
Dont Believe Tha Hype, Til Ya Feelin This.. Rewind The Track.. We Killin Kids..
And If Its A Doggy Dawg World Then Im Sick Of You Kats; More Than A Predator..
Take A Bitch, Tether Her.. Call My Dawgs Over And Fed Him Her..
Less Than Be Sure.. Look To The Right.. Then To My Face..
Im White ! Nah.. Ima Light Shade Of Beige..
You Muther Fuckers Want Me To Spell It Out 4 You, Or Have You Already Sensed It ?..
If Hip Hop Is A Black Mans Culture Then Why Do Black People Protest Against It ?..
Its Pathetic, Societys Gone.. Parents Spend Lives Catchin The Youth..
Whats The Use? What Is Knowledge If We Stretchin The Truth?..
So Here's What You Do.. Ima A White Emcee In A Booth..
So Suck My Dick.. Stereo Type Me N' I'll Stereo Type You..

Sum Bullshit Keystyle.. Feedback

Anything ?

Hmmm,
Decent piece.More poetic then anything though,the formatt that is.You had a few multis,but if you want it to be a track you'll need a chorus,verse one and verse two.But try some metties and vocab,and there ya go
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