my first try at a poetic peice...forgive me if its bad...lol..its about a loved one...that i lost 2 years ago 2 a fake best friend..


Tamara A.K.A sweetie, i miss you...
and your beuaty, wut do i do?..
two years of not haven you here
have you even seen my tears
you dissed me for no reason
told me to stop breathing
why for the all the hate...?
i didnt want us to seperate..
didnt talk trash it was false
loven you was my only inpulse
i couldnt sleep that week
that you said i was a freak
i miss you babe why you leave?
i need you here..to make you believe
that what im saying is true
cant, wont lemme talk to u
you say im a disapointment
but can i make an apointment
to try an tell you how i truly do feel
explain that statements were unreal
sweetie, i miss you, I want a chance
is it to much, just one last dance....
my best friend used me to get to you
told you lied yet you say were through
all that devilish acts but yet
i have no slight regret...just respect
that i want you back never eject..
im scared for life..now thatchu left

thats a quick poem i hope you all like it...peace

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