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Old 10-09-03, 08:58 PM   #1
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[Wk2] Maddawg_MKN vs Bizzurk

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Verses Due: Thursday October 15th
Voting Ends: Sunday October 18th

Topic: Life In Meters

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Old 10-09-03, 09:03 PM   #2
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Old 10-14-03, 02:34 PM   #3
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checkin in......................good luck kid, peace, 1
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Old 10-16-03, 12:25 AM   #4
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Always told to remain on solid ground…take Baby Steps/
Lets Take a Sec. and Relate to Sex, lets consider Datin’ for Ex./
Try to hold hands before tha Laydees Breasts/
Display talent…try Creatin’ Text, instead of Waitin’ for Checks/
Basic Steps…after solid decisions, Patience is Next/
Anticipating future actions…leads to Procrastination at Best/
Holding heads up from submerging…emcees “Facing” Death/
Back to Solid Decisions, foremost…Acknowledge your Mission/
Think smarter…not harder, Polish your Visions/
One wrong turn can leave you Demolished in Prison/
Try Not ta Listen, stray from fights…Swallow tha Friction/
Srive for Conviction, retain reason…don’t Follow Fiction/
Goin’ from cigs to joints, you just Remodeled Addiction/
Its betta to take pointless steps, than those Hollowed and Missin’/
Be careful of what you say…Although its Diction/
Words can hurt, and so can Hollowed Tips, Kid/
Cognition is important…knowledge is Instant/…Power
Hold stead fast and never Doubt God/
Even “baby steps” have consequences, so what About Bob/
Lyfe requires effort, that’s why I don’t Like Cheaters/
Stealin’ text is NOT sumthin tha Lord Likes, Either/
Decisions Might Teeter, but ya can neva falter…Write Weaker/
Large bounds could exclude tha World, you Might Leave Her/
Perceptions distorted, talkin’ ish to thugs, Despite Heaters/
Without structure (lyfe), your frame cant support “Wife Beaters”/
Dangerous decisions result in Blood on White Sneakers/
A racial salute, morals destroyed, choose tha Right Leaders/
Pace yourself with “quickness” and stiff arm Tanights Breathers/
Ohh well…
“Measure up”, try miles…forget Lyfe in Meters/

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Old 10-19-03, 04:37 PM   #5
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nice drop, im impressed. u just kept coming with the comparisons and had multi rhyming goin on... kept me interested .
probably would won if he woulda showedm, too.

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Old 10-19-03, 09:08 PM   #6
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nice piece Maddawg. one line I didn't get:
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Even “baby steps” have consequences, so what About Bob/


Who the fuck is bob and what does he have to do with life in meters?
okay, you win.
Bizzurk is out of the league.
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