KING OF THIEVES:
I was born as an illegitimate-kid as my pops just got hit-wit'-a-bid...
reminisce on all the spliffs-that-I-lit and all the evil shit-that-I-did...
parents used to call me hand-some...
pops bought me a hand-gun...
I been waitin' for the day to put a clip-in-and-spit...
cause I'm sick-of-the-shit...
I remember the dayz when I used to be young buck sellin' drugz-on-the-block...
empty wallet...with hidden money under-my-sock...
one-with-my-Glock one that will never be loved-by-the-cops...
hid my drugz-by-my-crotch...
sprinklin' dust-on-my-pot...
then one day a 13 year old named Tomas decided to write-in-his-rhymepad...
amateur lungz at the time...high-off-a-dime-bag...he just kept on writin'-as-time-passed...
he rhymed-wack...but then again...he was young and still new-in-the-game...
he grew-in-the-brain over the yearz to prove-he'z-deranged...
at the tender age of 17 he got arrested and neglected by cops...
I had to sell my favorite weapon-my-glock...
when I got arrested for snatching pursez the jakez even questioned-my-watch...
now I'm almost 19 with a job-of-my-own-and-some-cash...
but still pissed cause I ain't got a girl to give me some slob-on-my-bone-and-some-ass...


COM:
Born illegitimate; Torn from the tit-I-licked
Adorned with a lyric-stick but Scorned when I spit-a-bit
I’m going to do-this-properly; become the truest-prophecy
Ain’t no Judas-stopping-me becoming the purest-prodigy
My rhymes piss-on-thought; I listen-to-what-I’m-taught
Can’t remember December and I’m sick of missing-court
I got my eye-on-fame but dopes fried-my-brain
The dealers want my head coz I’m suppling-the-same
Now I’m suprising-the-game, my emotion is devotion
My motion leaves you soaking, causing waves in the ocean
Supposing I’m signed, my life will be aligned
I give you food for thought while I dine on your mind

tight shit keep spittin.~1~

thanks...uppin'...

Tight indeed

Flow, Vocab and wordplay was really good
it was all there.....this was a nice collab
keep droppin ya'll

please check out my latest piece
"I'll Never Quit"
the link is in my Sig
peace!

mad props to you both...
A.T.

hott shit, dope as hell...........i liked it...........nice vocab wordplay metas and such..........nice job both props............uppn this for them

that was tight, i liked it, i bet COM like "OH SHIT THIS NOOB LIKED IT!!" yea i did, but it don't mean i like U, King: hit ur head on a cloud, naomean?...

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^^^lol...what happened?????? I'm lost in ya thought...

WTF is YOUR problem fag/bitch what eva

I still don't understand what that's supposed to mean...but uppin'...

he means he liked the collab but he doesnt like my verse and he also means you blew me into the sky or sum shit meaning you beat me, but this aint a battle ???? fuck knows

oh that's what he meanz?????? nah...the versez were equal in quality...COM'z a dope mc...of course...he'z an OMEN...lol

no... i meant both verses were ill but i don't like COM as a "person", he called me a noob when i gave Meks a constructive comment in his open mic, and by: hit ur head on a cloud, it's my way to say elivate...

oh, and i ain't tha fag, y is u hopin/
i turn happy and gay so we can be elop'n?/
i won't bitch, jus shut ur mouth/
ain't my fault u labeled urself "able to gown down south"/

COM, shut ur face, shit...this was for u by tha way^^...

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^^ for me!! wow you shouldnt have,, post in bitch slapped and i'll bitch slap ya wack self