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|  09-20-03, 03:00 AM |  #1 | ||||||
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				EvEryDay~ShiT
			 IP: AA94 58F3 a new day and tha news is portrayin useless on civilians// everyday tha same-situation never change-switchin-places erasin-faces by tha millions// billions more rip-hardcore,tripped on hard-floors, when my balance extinguished// my beef is relinquished but i squashed it lookin at this delinquent// frequent tags outline tha zigs-and-zags,and pigs-get-mad when i get-my-bag// roll a couple and take some drags, pullin harder than homosexual fags// my destination is a search for respiration, smoke in a room full of desilation// Chorus my life slows when tha shows get empty// slice mics to excite, so dont tempt-me// i entice your wrong and right, you cant exempt-me// watch me change-up// tha style my girl fucked-so-much rearrange-nuts, tired of plain-sluts// want-it-unique, want a girl whos wantin-to-speak// flauntin-my-speech,tauntin-my-reach// so my dick'll make up for tha inches lost-when-we-meet// relationships long-distance, don't work but make for strong-fitness// im my own witness, who spits lyrics tha swiftest, hit ya bitch then rip ya dickless// now whos sickest, ill-rhymes will-fill-minds w/ real-crime// Syndicates intricately mixin-shit in real-time// gotta nine heres tha real-shine now feel-mine// Chorus my life slows when tha shows get empty// slice mics to excite, so dont tempt-me// i entice your wrong and right, you cant exempt-me// facts-are-made and acts-are-played, performed like jack-when-sacks-get-slayed// roll up weed in tha back-we-lay, couple more blunts and in tha back-im-layed// walk astray from where tha beats-will-play, for my heat-ill-pray// too-much-disgust, thats whats-tha-fuss,watch-me-crush// mix my gin wit rasberry slush, then hush, tha sweet dro's-so-lush// snows-rush is tough-to-touch, and it fucks-ya-up// so-much it takes ya personality and sucks-it-up, ya luck-is-fucked// | ||||||
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|  09-21-03, 01:04 AM |  #2 | |||||||
| Atra Ludio or Hip-Hop? 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 | IP: 399E F0FD Obviously inherintly impressive lyrical abilitys. Probably should be saved for open mic or something. I dunno. Not sure how you can improve much on this specific peice. Point was gotten acrossed, and technical abilitys shown. That's pretty solid to me. ~Shalom~ | |||||||
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