Presidential Campaign


If I was president of the country, There'd be no problems here
I'd solve em here, By Legalizing weed & Exiling Fags & queers
People wouldnt know of fear, Cuz Peace would be year round
Why fuck wit other countries? If they aint fuckin wit our hometown..
I'll set the tone now.... Taxes? Fuck it my people who needs em?
I'd rather let ya'll keep it, so them pockets'll stay fat every season
Best Believe in the power of this formal democrat
I'd take a zillion dollars, and give every1 a limo back...
No reason for all of us not to be livin like we ballin
Instead of workin 9-5 tryna stay a float to keep from fallin
You here them stars callin...
The red the white the blue,
I'm tellin u right now, your greastest asset is right in front of you.
Take a month or two, & Remember my ideas and my campaign
"Capcom For President!! Wheres the weed, hoes & Champagne?"
Aint it lovely mayne...
We sippin Bubbley mayne...
Catchin Brainz in the tub, Show no love to the ugly game..
That we call life...C'mon People, elect me & watch me get it right
Fuck Work & School....I'm talkin Parties hoes & bitches everynight
And yes that's word Life....Women I aint forgot about ya'll
If I were President...I'd present the ladies wit a pretty Law
Only u gotta be pretty raw
Without a single Flaw..
And please believe I gaurentee that U can have it all!!
So Elect me...Ya neighborhood G....Capcom
The perfect president for every1 unless Clinton gets back on (LoL)

Quick Keystyle...Clownin over here, my 1st open mic...people drop some responses.

yo..ur structure wasn't that good....but honestly i thought this shit was dope...i would do the same shit if i was president...werd up...lol...im 4 real homie...dopeness indeed....i was feelin it......

CAPCOM FOR PRESIDENT..LOL.....

->Je@<-

Structure wasnt that good...

Umm.. concept kinda played...

Vocab wasnt bad...
Keep writing...

Peep
Huh? ft Chrit

hmm i agree with the concensus... structure could use help
the flow, despite struc, was good
the vocab could use touching up
mulits were lacking

you could do much better... trust i know

if you woud be so kind
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=81616

yeah this shit was good...the flow was good...the concept was good...creativity...I think I heard the topic before...but I wouldn't say it's played...just used once already...but this was a dope first open mic...just add a coupla more multie'z and this should be even doper...holla when you down for a collab...

i liked this peice........good open mic..........herd the concept once b4.......but this was tight as hell...........flow was on mafuckin point...........and i like where you went wit dis shit.......and i liked the structure........unlike these otha cats........i thought it was put togetha well...........good job bro great drop
keep it up

Yeah i liked this peice too, it was pretty good, You had good flow, your structure was good but you should try to even the lines out, you had a good concept too i thought, overall a good peice, If you get the chance check out my drop called "Losing hope" Thanks.

nice topic, well writ, structure was OK, a few more multies would set this piece on fire, very good for first open mic

keep writing..
and open micing..

peace.. PS i STILL think you should join Omens