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Old 09-20-03, 02:42 AM   #1
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15 Seconds of Fame; Removed From My Hour Of Power
The Older The Sweeter; At Fifteen, I'm Still Sour
The 4th Dimension, Man's Master; Eternal Prescence
Move Faster, Pay Attention; Time Is Of The Essence
Sloting Remedial Media;Watered Down 3 Course Meals
The Remorse Feels, Pass Time Till Your Horse Steals
Your Daughter's Virginity, She's A B C DeFlowered
Father Time's A Coward;Mother Nature's In The Shower
Move Slower, Turn Back The Hands Of Your Oppresser
Puncturing Skin With His Arrows,In Pain For Pleasure
Existant or resistant, Time seems to be persistant
Indignant of the reason, it seems to spoil the seasons
Spoils love of the heart, making partners soon depart
The smart, their minds diminish, until they are finished
Death being their last stand, like a battalions marching band
And time stands, quite idle, Often driving people suicidal
For time will sit, break your heart like it's a stick
And then it's all done, as soon as your time comes
Past-Present-Phuture, time's stages are indefinite
tearing at each other, with conceptions emaculate
but making you suffer, your soul acts as a buffer
realise and feel the lies till it's time for supper
There're never enough hours to meet stressful demands
like your grandfather clock, I got time on my hands
tighly coiled ropes helpin you cope with your stress
time's up, kick the stool,least it won't leave a mess
but the second keep ticking even after you're gone
time's omnipotent;perhaps the whole thing was wrong
What's the point of being, it's all just reasoning
It all depends on how you're seeing things
Delay the inevitable, Life is just regrettable
Debatable, your heart is incapable
to know what is right, life is a constant fight
To be on the top, only increases the height
For the fall, which comes to all

....In Due Time

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Old 09-20-03, 02:58 AM   #2
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YO YOUR BEIGINING PUNCH WAS A HELL OF A WAY TO START A PEACE NO DOUBT I LIKED THIS CONSITANT AND RAW.
YOU DONT SEACE TO AMAZE ME POP STAY DOING YOU AND IF I HAD A COMPLAINT ON THIS I WOULD LIST IT SO THERE'S A HINT
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Old 09-20-03, 03:05 AM   #3
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Dope drop..

I really like everything in this peice..

nothing really I can cratique because it was all just dope..

the A B C Deflowered line was clever =)..
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Old 09-21-03, 12:52 AM   #4
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Old 09-21-03, 10:23 PM   #5
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the fuck? up
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Old 09-22-03, 05:58 PM   #6
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you guys fucking suck. I've had to up this three days in a row.
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Old 09-22-03, 06:13 PM   #7
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hey i like yo shit dawg.keep rappin like hell.holla


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Old 09-22-03, 06:29 PM   #8
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Yea Dawg I like dat u keepin it real fa sho.
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Old 09-22-03, 07:33 PM   #9
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lmao^
faggots

a pretty good piece here
time is a subject which has been done quite alot but always seems to come out unique from the different ppl who write it
the first four lines were really good especially the first two
set the tone for the rest...
a few cliches took away from it in parts..but both stayed on topic
flow was solid
prefered the first paragraph from the rest althopugh it picked up towards the end
capped it off with a decent finish though
two distinct styles...prefered the first one overall but still a good read
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