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Time: Mad Man and Maven
IP: 8D9D 9F03
15 Seconds of Fame; Removed From My Hour Of Power
The Older The Sweeter; At Fifteen, I'm Still Sour The 4th Dimension, Man's Master; Eternal Prescence Move Faster, Pay Attention; Time Is Of The Essence Sloting Remedial Media;Watered Down 3 Course Meals The Remorse Feels, Pass Time Till Your Horse Steals Your Daughter's Virginity, She's A B C DeFlowered Father Time's A Coward;Mother Nature's In The Shower Move Slower, Turn Back The Hands Of Your Oppresser Puncturing Skin With His Arrows,In Pain For Pleasure Existant or resistant, Time seems to be persistant Indignant of the reason, it seems to spoil the seasons Spoils love of the heart, making partners soon depart The smart, their minds diminish, until they are finished Death being their last stand, like a battalions marching band And time stands, quite idle, Often driving people suicidal For time will sit, break your heart like it's a stick And then it's all done, as soon as your time comes Past-Present-Phuture, time's stages are indefinite tearing at each other, with conceptions emaculate but making you suffer, your soul acts as a buffer realise and feel the lies till it's time for supper There're never enough hours to meet stressful demands like your grandfather clock, I got time on my hands tighly coiled ropes helpin you cope with your stress time's up, kick the stool,least it won't leave a mess but the second keep ticking even after you're gone time's omnipotent;perhaps the whole thing was wrong What's the point of being, it's all just reasoning It all depends on how you're seeing things Delay the inevitable, Life is just regrettable Debatable, your heart is incapable to know what is right, life is a constant fight To be on the top, only increases the height For the fall, which comes to all ....In Due Time weRd?!
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YO YOUR BEIGINING PUNCH WAS A HELL OF A WAY TO START A PEACE NO DOUBT I LIKED THIS CONSITANT AND RAW.
YOU DONT SEACE TO AMAZE ME POP STAY DOING YOU AND IF I HAD A COMPLAINT ON THIS I WOULD LIST IT SO THERE'S A HINT |
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Dope drop..
I really like everything in this peice.. nothing really I can cratique because it was all just dope.. the A B C Deflowered line was clever =).. |
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up
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the fuck? up
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you guys fucking suck. I've had to up this three days in a row.
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hey i like yo shit dawg.keep rappin like hell.holla
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Yea Dawg I like dat u keepin it real fa sho.
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lmao^
faggots a pretty good piece here time is a subject which has been done quite alot but always seems to come out unique from the different ppl who write it the first four lines were really good especially the first two set the tone for the rest... a few cliches took away from it in parts..but both stayed on topic flow was solid prefered the first paragraph from the rest althopugh it picked up towards the end capped it off with a decent finish though two distinct styles...prefered the first one overall but still a good read |
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