Intro: (written by Gene Pool)
I'm just sick of all this hate, and this disgrace, when I try to pace/
but lifes got me down, strapped by the legs, with chains, and I just can't get away/
from all this pain, left to lay waste, from all the shit in my past that I can’t erase/
y does it have to be this way? Why can’t we all just get along and play?/
Cuz life just doesn’t work out that way/

Verse #1: (written by Gene Pool)
guns, money, greed, and weed, crack, streets, and friends who leave/
what’s wrong with this piece? Maybe it’s the talk of all these bitches who can’t see/
believe me when I speak, cuz my shit sinks deep, but I got a message for all these pussy creeps/
who think they livin thugged out on the streets, but if u gave them a piece/
and put them in the middle of heat, then we’ll see who sits 6 feet deep/
I’m just sick of hearin this bullshit, to roll this, to bowl this, to throw this/
to load this, to tow this bitch, to pay a toll on this clit, to suck this dick/
but it’s got me pissed, so upset cuz chicks just bitch, and bitch, and bitch/
what the fuck is with this, it’s like a spreading sickness, lay at rest ur eyes and just sit back and be a witness/
cuz no one gives a damn, of where u from my man, just stick to ur own fuckin clan/
before u get shot in the hand, or the head, or the legs, or the body, or the arms/
or take one in throat, right in the jugular to watch ur blood squirt and see u choke/
laugh at the fact when they strip u broke, it’s just the way the world turns ma bro/
so sick and I should know, cuz I know ppl that sniff the blow, and inject the shit slow/
heroin wouldn’t know? So I take my anger out, on life itself, cuz sometimes I can’t fight this hell/


Verse #2: (written by Masta C)
You ever been so mad, you wanna just tare, ya hair-out?/
Going in on 2 on 1 battles, just to make things fair-now/
And you have no trust cause all ya friends turnt-they-back/
Now you just sit around the house just burnt-off-crack/
Cause no one knows how the fuck you-feel/
When all you got is rhymes which is your only true-skill/
And im tired of these big shots that make you feel-like-shit/
Cause you keep getting turned down but you still-fight-it/
Dreamed to be on the top, but now it wont happen/
Cause you gotta family and soon gotta give up rappen/
And with all this pressure and tension, your gonna burst like a water main snappen/
And im so tired of all this bad shit happening to me, I cant take-it/
This isnt fake-shit, and I really hate-this, the way fate-is/
Is does nothing but fuck me over, as I lay here and grow colder/
Just wishing my life would just pass me by slower/


Chorus: (written by Gene Pool and Masta C)
Life is what we hate, end it now why wait?/ - (Masta C)
Dont be late, just end it like it was fate/ - (Masta C)
life is what we hate, just end ur shit in disgrace/ - (Gene Pool)
with that look of shame, fate is lame, juss finish it the easy way/ - (Gene Pool ^^^)
no need to be scared, you have nothing to lose/ - (Masta C)
You'll be famous and end up the 6 o'clock news/ - (Masta C)
and take u to the gravediggaz tomb, to stick u in a room/ - (Gene Pool^^^)
u've met ur doom, but don't be afraid, cuz life has left u/ - (Gene Pool^^^)


Verse #3: (written by Gene Pool)
I spit sick, so tired from doin this shit, maybe I should call it quits/
but fuck it, cuz I got some shit, that I gotta get off dis chest, before I lay at rest/
now I’m gonna bust this test! Straight out rippin flesh, all these bitches always wantin ta step/
but now they gonna wish they dead, R.I.P. ya I bet! Left in “pieces” u will be/
cuz I’m insane B, don’t need to be a G to kill bitches unimaginably/
and all I want, is to get back at all those fucks, that are all just talk, but no walk/
cuz they think their tough, enough to rock the spot, but they gonna drop, when I’m on top/
callin the shots, so yea! that’s what I thought u fuckin punks! And my mother to/
no fake shit, this is real dude, steal the groove, and flip this shit twist up this tune/
and diss my mom, cuz I fuckin hate u! Take me from what I really want, well guess what mom?/
I hope Jason leaves u! With the kid, so u know how and what life really fuckin is!
Cuz I’ve learnt my lesson, keep my mouth shut and don’t ask questions/
that’s the way life keeps questin, cuz their’s always time and room for second guessin/
gossip, the key term on how the world turns, just there to have left u burn/
and this shit’s absurd! So sick of livin in this dictionary of missin words/
a blank page no matter where u turn, cuz it’s life I hate, and all I do is yearn/
to earn respect, but what’s the point to show up your best for all the rest/
await the day, of my eternal sleep, and when it seems to be/
make sure to bury me 2 times as deep as 6 feet, so I can sleep in peace/


Verse #4: (written by Masta C)
I just hate all these back stabbers, that just betray-you/
Then they come back asking to be friends so they can replay-you/
And what really gets me is all the big guys picking on the weak/
Walking around like your ass will be next to beat/
Then theres all these people that talk shit, and cant back-it/
Cause the fact-is, that they nothing but wack-shit/
And they lack-it, cause they don’t got good tactics/
I just had enough of all these-fakes, that think they hot-shit/
So please-take, this as a warning cause you honestly don’t got-it/
And all these fucks think you just joking, but they the ones croaking/
Cause you got there clothes in their own blood soaking/
And im not making-it, cause everyones just holding me-back/
They just faking-shit, its so clear everybody can see-that/
Just fire the shots, and put me outta-this-pain/
I gave it all I got, now I want outta-this-game/

Outro: (written by Masta C)
Theres just so much going on that cant be controlled, its just-wack/
And I would never trust-that, anyone can help cause they all bust-gats/
Cause its like hell on earth, wishing you would have just died at birth/
Shot and killed taken to ya grave in a hurse, what more could get worse?/

Chorus: (written by Gene Pool and Masta C)
Life is what we hate, end it now why wait?/
Dont be late, just end it like it was fate/
life is what we hate, just end ur shit in disgrace/
with that look of shame, fate is lame, juss finish it the easy way/
no need to be scared, you have nothing to lose/
You'll be famous and end up the 6 o'clock news/
and take u to the gravediggaz tomb, to stick u in a room/
u've met ur doom, but don't be afraid, cuz life has left u/

Chorus: (written by Gene Pool and Masta C)
Life is what we hate, end it now why wait?/
Dont be late, just end it like it was fate/
life is what we hate, just end ur shit in disgrace/
with that look of shame, fate is lame, juss finish it the easy way/
no need to be scared, you have nothing to lose/
You'll be famous and end up the 6 o'clock news/
and take u to the gravediggaz tomb, to stick u in a room/
u've met ur doom, but don't be afraid, cuz life has left u/

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Yeah, please leave some feedback on this, much appreciated, Thanks.

u know I'd hate to think that me and masta c spent all this time workin on this rhyme for nothin. so come on ppl let's get some feedback here plz and thanx in advance.

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Crazy shit, it had all the elements in which to make a verse sound good, you had a weird kind of flow.. Sometimes it didnt flow, but your vocab and multis were pretty well done. Nice Peice man! Off the Shizzle.

*Thanks for the feedback on my thread.

np man and also as a reminder that Masta C also contributed to the writing of this drop so just sayin to remember to include him. thanx for the feedback man.

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Yeah, thanks for reminding the people Gene, Leave some more feedback, much appreciated, Thanks.

that was good. id like to hear it though so i could get more of a flow to it. but it sounds like it could get u on top.

ya I know it'd sound way better if it was an audio track and that fact kinda pisses me off that it ain't but thanx for the feedback.

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hey, thanks for the feedback, keep it coming, and yeah i think it would sound good on audio, i could actually do my part on audio cause i have the stuff, but thanks for the feedback, much appreciated, thanks.

this was an ill piece, good flow,good multis,good structure by both of you, kind of a gloomy piece,too bad we cant see more of us not depressed and stressed,keep droppin tha hotness.~1~

yo man wait till I post are next piece tomorrow u'll be surprised cuz it's a more up beat songand I know ppl here are gonna like it so look out for it the piece is called "high times" so I'll be happy to get some feedback on it and what u thought of the song once u get to read it tomorrow and as always thanx again for the feedback on this piece to it's much appreciated

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Thanks for the feedback, Yeah are next peice is totally different than this, hopefully we will have it up tomorrow, check it out then, and thanks for the feedback again, Much Appreciated, thanks.

hey. just uppin this for some more fedback. and also I'll be postin up our new rhyme today "high times" so whatch out for it. thanx again peace.

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shit was cool y'all...
Pretty good concept...
shit was a bit simple at first, but then it picked up...
Shit was mad long, alot to read... but thas aight... lol...
the flow was decent, it was a bit hard to catch at firsst, but then I got it... it was aight...
Yo, I'm gon' check that other one y'all dropped now...

Peace