Here are the rules:
10 lines max,
No hate, d/r or crew votes,
No prewrittens
Ill spit first

right lad u spit am ready for it

try go easy as am new to dis shit lad mind it wont matta i still kick ass lol (just using 100 characters lol)

Hey yo,
Naturally a disaster//You're so damn slow, could I flow any faster?//Looks like this prick pricked himself, lemme get you a plaster//You expected a newbie, you got the fuckin master//Grab a pistol, and into submission I'll start to blast//In a minute you're gonna need a whole body cast//Your style is embarassing, its so stale, you've failed//Get yo ass back to Wales, you like a beached whale//All you can do it flail, from this boat named the Rap, you should bail//Open my sails, let them billow, sail towards ya//Comin to kill ya, start to bellow, im gettin iller//
Next time ill finish ya :P

I went sortof easy on ya lol, but I dont doubt ur skills I dont think i really needed to ...................................(dam this 100character rule! I h8 it so badly lol).............................................. .......

lol @ the 100 character thingy, good rhymes lad

OK OK OK OK LISTEN LISTEN

me 5yr old sis got more skill//
you betta take note of ma flow its so fuckin ill//
better go grab urself a beer your not gunna like this//
if i'd have used protection you wouldn't even be ere i regret the first kiss//
get your mum sum rub she'll even let u ave her up da fuckin bum//
your rhymes are fucking wank//
mine are that tight they're blowing you away like a fuckin tank//
i might be new to this//
check it out im totaly taking da fucking piss//

Trizt took this

Better dissing

Nt disaster needs a lil elevating but he still learnin da ropes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=67759


Vote goes to triz warrior

hey yo,
thats some okay stuff u pulled there i guess
PS tell your five year old sis daddy is ashamed of her from me (dont worry Natural you'll figure wat i said out someday :P)

synikill : : Yeah am still learning this shit lad soz i aint as good as you lot but as i said im startin ere so i'll get betta with time

Triztwarrior : : Soz mate but i think my lines where iller am new to this shit but whateever good battle dawg

nah man

natural you need to elevate
seriously....


acctualy it wasn't a bad battle....

you both need elevation

vote-triz
he had a better verse over all
but i didnt like your structure
cruise the bords and look around
this isn't much of a game
people acctualy spit sensibol lines on this site

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KAUTIOUS

PhSyCoLoGiCaL LyRiCiSt

lol okay Kautious ill work on incorporatin some more relevant lines in my shit thanks for the feedback

kautious thanks for the advice man, i'll have a look round gimme some ideas like, again sorry about earlier lol actin a prick 'n' all

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yo
Natural u have 4 unfinished (or somethin like that) battles happenin right now, just a warnin; ur only allowed two unclosed battles happenin at one time. be careful dawg

Peace Out

shit i didnt know that shit dawg nobody told me like

nooooooo i lost them all anyways but i dont wanna piss no peeps off like hopefuly it will go un-noticed

peace out