NEW ON DA SCENE

I can part the sea like Moses, can you lyrically appose this
I’m atrocious I’m ferocious I want your real not fake prognosis
Your unqualified diagnosis?
Can’t control this with a few sessions of hypnosis,
Couldn’t if you tried its not a case of verbal halitosis
- Don’t suppose this – I’m the closest
Ill challenge your mind to go so high you’ll get deep vein thrombosis
You’ll be lying on your back praying for miracle or some thing to record this
Yes its raucous, it’s exhaustive, from my true vocal resources
Might even wake the post-mortive yes the ones with fully set in rigamortis?
Even the cremated in their jars waiting to be snorted
Or the babies in the maternity ward dead, terminated, / (slash) aborted
Speaking of snorted id like to get sorted, so I’ll see ya when I’ve bought it.

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Every day I don’t complain aint got no reason why
Cos some of the time know my mind and on myself I can rely
You have got to be wise and never give - remember always try
And If you can’t be good all through your life,
Don’t get caught when you fucking lie
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Yes I’m back my fuckin nose is stinging I feel so high I should be fuckin singing
My ears are ringin, and I can’t stop grinning,
Fuckin hell I must be mingin - must be making a mint a fucking killing
He said if I’m willing he’d cut me in that’s if I help him with the shifting
I said to him WHAT A STUPID FUCKIN QUESTION point me to your kitchen
The faster we start bagging it up the faster we can start all the dishin
No more wishin, what an expedition, my new mission new found affliction

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Every day I don’t complain aint got no reason why
Cos some of the time know my mind and on myself I can rely
You have got to be wise and never give - remember always try
And If you can’t be good all through your life,
Don’t get caught when you fucking lie
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Yes this is the last verse no I mean this is the first chapter,
From the newest contender mind bender that’s me myself N.D.eva
Just new on the scene never heard before can you see my big dilemma
Hope you like my shit, but if not whatever cos I’m not strapped wit in a tether,
Not me not never far to street wise far to clever
Just like my name I attempt with effort
If you‘d ever looked I up or went to school I think you’d know that
-That’s a bold fact, too much Prozac, yes ya eye lids are sown back
Spend to long injecting 2nd 3rd 4th grade smack and I think you know that
Your like a throw back chi noble victim revamp
Only difference is they can’t help it - it was wot they were dealt with
Whereas your da product if a festering twat and a fucked up helmet

DONT GET CAYGHT WHEN YOU FUCKIN LIE................................

wot da ya think.........................

HIT ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Not bad, but seems your tryin to use to many complex words in your shit. Good wordplay though, no mistakin that, but tryin to hard, looks like youve gone thru a dictionary, picked out hot words then used em in any order. Not dissin though, just constructive criticism

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^^^ I DIDNT DESIGN THAT,,, JUST UPLOADED IT FOR N.D.eva,, its his creation

this was a nice peice i thought, you had good wordplay and your vocab was good too, your flow was good also i thought, keep dropping man, and check out Me and Gene Pools new peice today sometime its called "2 of a kind" thanks.

checked ya shit out, "NICE ONE BROVA"