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Old 09-22-03, 05:37 PM   #1
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Tight Shit

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Dis Shit is real in da battlefield\so i stay packin da steal\and i keep a glock in my pocket\ready to cock it\and when dem hollows fire at ya nuttin can stop it\and im still holdin it down\reppin ctown\if ya come around we gonna let off rounds cuz bitch u on dangerous gronds\and i dont care who got ya back\im still bustin wit da mac\and jus watchin da motha fuckin money stack.


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Old 09-22-03, 05:43 PM   #2
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yo i can tell u can write, man, but i think the subject was the main weakness of this one, because, and obviously no disrespect, when u read it you think same old, same old. we hear bout how we gonna get shot all the time, and sometimes its to much. try droppin somethin somethin more positive. the rhymes are good, especially since you're new, just work on the concept. Peace
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Old 09-22-03, 06:48 PM   #3
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AIght Jadee.cold.cold.holla

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Old 09-22-03, 07:14 PM   #4
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