Alright this may and may not pull in your attension. People have ways of venting and for me well It's feeling a rush that only some can handle. It has no flow but it's ment for the feeling. Enjoy




As I sit here and take this shit from you. Your feeding fuel to a fire that should have never been started. Keep yelling and bitching at me. Guess what, Fuck you, as i slam the table to the wall and rush out the door with my keys in my hand and my shades in the other. As i climb in my car and turn the key, the engine explodes with life and I feel the power. I sit and think and then slap it into gear and spin the tires as the rpms jump and the tires pour with smoke. I take off down the step and fly around the croners with such ease. I get to a stop light and then add the most explosive part to the fire. I turn on my techno and get set and ready to fly. I feel the music flow through my body and as I rev the car I feel so intuned with the car and road. As the light turns green I slam on it, spinning the tires and head for the highway. Jumping on it I arm the switch knowing i'm gonna push the button. I put the peddle to the floor and just fly as the turbo spools and i get thrown back into my seat. Going faster and faster i shift higher and weave throught the traffic like thread through a parttern, so percise. I keep going faster and faster and i head towards that stretch to were i once found myself stuggling to stay alive..... I exceed 140mph and i still accelerate faster as i start to reach the peak power. As i reach the stretch and see no cars I put my foot to the floor and push the button as a boost of power enters and i speed faster and faster. At that one point in time i'm free of everything in the world as I get that much needed rush. As i reach the peak speed, I stop spraying and i let the car slow down. I get off at the next exit and go to the lake front and park. As i get out I collasp to the ground, my whole body shaking of excitment and fear. Adrenaline still coursing though my veins. As i start to calm down i look to the computer in the car, Top speed................210!!!........... I have exceeded my limit. Paying attension to the sound of music and the pur of the motor. My anger is now gone and I sit there and see that I live To feed my rush another nite....................................

definitly no flow...but your emotions an descriptins really brought it out..good drop man..check out myn Am I A Ghost...the wordplay in this was good...an oyu really pulled through you have great p[otential...keep it up..peace

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The Weathers Art
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My Teenage Eyes
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Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
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I'ma be honest here, it wasn't one of your best drops...but it still had some good elements to it. The emotion was there and most of all the description caught my attention, i liked it. Keep on elevating my nigga. Luv and Respect ya.

the way its sructured is hard to read..........its a BIG giant Paragraph of poetry kno what i mean

the RUSH is felt however and it stays with you (the reader) till teh end......great usage of active words that let you follow the motion of the peice....
well written

hazy

uppin, anymore replies?? if not tis k peace

Smooth check mine, return the favour LOL holler if ya hear me my nigga fa sho!

'Battlefield Losses'

peepz it aint what you think, no shit about war...well.....its about the war i'm faced with every day when i get outta bed in the morning.

peep it.

Great flow, I liked it overall. Seems really familiar to me, I've done it once or twice. Just everyday problems getting to you and people not making it any better by complaining or yelling. Great job JT. Keep writin em.