*Hook*
If this song had a mulit view, with 2 odd crews
Were not shrewd just honest, this is all about you
Lyrical promise laced with plenty of satirical prowess
RB sacred ground so walk away, don’t stay around this

The Realists wordplay fast and to the point
Fast like past Detroit not fat like Pastor Troy
Was the play on words too advanced for boys
Even if we are jokers you aren’t playing with us
Even when you rap mad what you say aint serious
You got ripped and died and just kept on braggin
No wonder I see you dick riding on the banned wagon
Pants sagging, you spit freestyles after days of planning
If your so fire why am I frost bit, is my watch that frosted
Call me a liar but I gave you a bass line, you crossed it
Is this collab an Omen or some kind of Insane Joke
I heard you words choke when I broke the first note
I don’t spend yet I'm broke, hell even if I don’t get paid g’s
In the end I intend to drop more collabs than JD
Messages conveyed: deep, positions played: steep
I dream of you in audio, no wait I fell asleep

*Hook*
If this song had a mulit view, with 2 odd crews
Were not shrewd just honest, this is all about you
Lyrical promise laced with plenty of satirical prowess
RB sacred ground so walk away, don’t stay around this

*NONCENTZ#
A lot of you have no idea how easy it is to looks stupid so I guess im a have to help you out.

As far as bars….you w~rap as much as open packages-
I manage with my lyrical advantages-
To Define verbs to names actions…then combine
them with a punchline to cause physical damages.
You cant spit 3 lines,fuck it you cant spit 2-
TOO SHORT would son you.
so how you think you can beat one of my hiku’s-
With your lack ofmaterial sub~stince.
Murder you with a stanza and call that poetic justice.
your shit is just hints- of project ignorance-
plus you couldn’t migrate to the ghetto as imagrints.
A lot of you think rap is aboute GANG BANGS-
CLOTHES, CURSING, where you HANG, SLANG-and weak freestyles
If it is….. your out~ fashioned, lynched,fucked, with no style.
It MAKES KNOW CENTZ and who?-
We 2 of the REALIST you fools have no clues.
How we misuse verbal format for combat.
GLUE your brain to a PUNCHLINES with tacks-
then leave you STUCK-After the HOOK ~STRUCK.
You couldn’t spit or bust hot if you suck the devils nut-and choked up.

uppin

Damn hot flow, .....u spitted nice here, ...some nice vocab ,....and concept was iite to , real decent drop props man

CLOTHES, CURSING, where you HANG, SLANG-and weak freestyles
If it is….. your out~ fashioned, lynched,fucked, with no style.

nice one

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that was a tight collab, you 2 had equal verses...both ya flows was on point an wordplay was good, you both showed great potential, i liked wordp end line the best though...

then leave you STUCK-After the HOOK ~STRUCK.
You couldn’t spit or bust hot if you suck the devils nut-and choked up.

that finisher was dope
but realist came great as well i liked this line..

If your so fire why am I frost bit, is my watch that frosted
Call me a liar but I gave you a bass line, you crossed it

well put together..good shit...9/10

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

nice stuff.

i liked the first verse over the second, just my opinion, styles didnt mix well but both stayed on point, keep it up.

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